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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "I'm Sorry To Tell You This....."Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
43 total reviews
Comment from Sharesy
This is precious! I just loved it. That is some smart five year old. This was a really cute piece. There were no spags. Teenage boys are pretty much the same the world over, when it comes to romance.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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This is precious! I just loved it. That is some smart five year old. This was a really cute piece. There were no spags. Teenage boys are pretty much the same the world over, when it comes to romance.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Sharesy,
My little three year old grandaughter is going to be a quick one like the girl in this story..She always has a remark...out of the mouths of the innocent. Thanks! Carol
Comment from RobinWrites
What an adorable story. This is well written and left me with a smile. I think both answer to her questions we right on the mark. Great job.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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What an adorable story. This is well written and left me with a smile. I think both answer to her questions we right on the mark. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Robin,
Me too! I appreciate your enjoyment as well as the kind words. Thank you...Carol
Comment from mohintl
wow i really liked this alot it makes you think about the way the lord makes things the way he does.
good luck in the contest and anything else you may be creating here
good luck
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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wow i really liked this alot it makes you think about the way the lord makes things the way he does.
good luck in the contest and anything else you may be creating here
good luck
Comment Written 24-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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mohintl
Sorry for my late response. Life has been a little out of control the past few days...I appreciate your generous comments. CArol
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you are welcome
Comment from Ann Smith
The details and dialogue in the story are believeable and I can image being there listening in on the conversation. I can hear the relief from dad when Beth asked her question. It seemed easy at the time but you know how that can go. I like the humor and the quick wit of the waitress. Good luck with the contest. ann
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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The details and dialogue in the story are believeable and I can image being there listening in on the conversation. I can hear the relief from dad when Beth asked her question. It seemed easy at the time but you know how that can go. I like the humor and the quick wit of the waitress. Good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Ann,
Thank you so much for the kind comments. I apologize for my late response. Life got away from me. Smiles, CArol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very good Carol, a wise and prefect answer to the question in the end of your dialogue contest poem.
I have to say that Mike is right on top of things and knows how to answer questions.
smiles
PS Just to let you know I won't be reviewing for a couple or more months. I have been told I must take a break and take care of my health.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Very good Carol, a wise and prefect answer to the question in the end of your dialogue contest poem.
I have to say that Mike is right on top of things and knows how to answer questions.
smiles
PS Just to let you know I won't be reviewing for a couple or more months. I have been told I must take a break and take care of my health.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Gert
Please take care of yourself and stop back from time to time to let us know how you are doing.I hope that all goes well and you feel fine real soon. Take care and you shall always be in my thoughts and prayers...Smiles, Carol
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Thank you so much Carol
God Bless
Gert
Comment from amel
A delightful little story to read, carol. The dialogs you crafted are awesome and made me smile, absorb me from the beginning to the end. I love the detail of you story. A smart dialog like this
'Why does God make girls so beautiful?"
Fabulous post.
Love, amel
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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A delightful little story to read, carol. The dialogs you crafted are awesome and made me smile, absorb me from the beginning to the end. I love the detail of you story. A smart dialog like this
'Why does God make girls so beautiful?"
Fabulous post.
Love, amel
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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amel,
Thank you for your awesome response to my story. I apologize for my late thank you. LIfe is moving faster than this old lady can keep uyp I guess. Smiles, CArol
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YOu are most welcome, carol. I understand you are busy. Love, amel
Comment from BlueJamme
Hi there,
Another flawless and entertaining write you've got here. The characters are crafted well and believable in their actions. You also did well to set the scene with such a tight word count.
Well done!
BlueJamme
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Hi there,
Another flawless and entertaining write you've got here. The characters are crafted well and believable in their actions. You also did well to set the scene with such a tight word count.
Well done!
BlueJamme
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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BlueJamme
Thankyou for the kind and generous comemnts. Sorry for my late response..life is moving faster than this old lady can keep up. Smiles, CArol
Comment from jadapenn
Haha, even young Beth knows exactly what her stupid brother is up to. Shame, is Jimmy so transparent. I loved this contest entry. Full of fun and humour.
Well done, Smiles. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Haha, even young Beth knows exactly what her stupid brother is up to. Shame, is Jimmy so transparent. I loved this contest entry. Full of fun and humour.
Well done, Smiles. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Jada,
Glad you enjoyed the poke at the male species. Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from MizKat
I think your story is precious. I like the daddy's and little girl's conversation. I assume the waitress was the mother of the little girl and boy.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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I think your story is precious. I like the daddy's and little girl's conversation. I assume the waitress was the mother of the little girl and boy.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Kat,
Apologize for my tardy response. Life is moving too fast for this old lady. I appreciate your time and comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Nanny 6
I'm chuckling as I'm writing this review. Kids say the cutest things in innocence. This is a funny little story and most enjoyable. Good luck... Judy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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I'm chuckling as I'm writing this review. Kids say the cutest things in innocence. This is a funny little story and most enjoyable. Good luck... Judy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Judy,
Thaqnk you so much for your kind comments. I apologize for my tardy response...life is moving far too fast for this old lady. Smiles, Carol
