Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Dawny53
I get the impression that the writer feels guilt over this relationship. The only thing missing here is why? Nice writing, but his own confusion takes away from the point he is trying make.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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I get the impression that the writer feels guilt over this relationship. The only thing missing here is why? Nice writing, but his own confusion takes away from the point he is trying make.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi deepwater - This is a lovely piece of writing. Thoughtfully written with some lovely lines. I particularly like your penultimate line 'Or live under...' and your last line is very moving. Great photograph. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Hi deepwater - This is a lovely piece of writing. Thoughtfully written with some lovely lines. I particularly like your penultimate line 'Or live under...' and your last line is very moving. Great photograph. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Zue65
Yes, most soldiers go through this trauma, torn by family affinity and devotion to protect one's country. Sometimes what they really need is understanding and warmth, a human company as they continue their journey and finally find peace in themselves. Your poem carry that message effectively. God bless.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Yes, most soldiers go through this trauma, torn by family affinity and devotion to protect one's country. Sometimes what they really need is understanding and warmth, a human company as they continue their journey and finally find peace in themselves. Your poem carry that message effectively. God bless.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Carole Rosa
Gary, all of your poetic works have deep and sincere messages hidden within the verses. I have enjoyed each and every poem that I have read, which has been posted by you. I think this photo is neat. Is it a photo of someone you know?
Very nice piece of work. Carole
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Gary, all of your poetic works have deep and sincere messages hidden within the verses. I have enjoyed each and every poem that I have read, which has been posted by you. I think this photo is neat. Is it a photo of someone you know?
Very nice piece of work. Carole
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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It is thanks
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your poetry is extremely personal. I like that you give hints at your past, yet never really lay it out there for us to see. We, as readers, can only assume what you have done and been through. Great thought process in this. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Your poetry is extremely personal. I like that you give hints at your past, yet never really lay it out there for us to see. We, as readers, can only assume what you have done and been through. Great thought process in this. Nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank ou
Comment from poetbear
There is so much depth and feeling in your work. Everybody here can relate to it in some fashion.
I ma just sorry that haven't reviewed you sooner but it is a bad habit to just review the writers you are used to reviewing.
That habit is forever broken after fininding one as talented as you are!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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There is so much depth and feeling in your work. Everybody here can relate to it in some fashion.
I ma just sorry that haven't reviewed you sooner but it is a bad habit to just review the writers you are used to reviewing.
That habit is forever broken after fininding one as talented as you are!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo compliments this piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with from/finding...stand/stone. I see nothing that I will add, change or take out of this piece. Good work.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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The photo compliments this piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with from/finding...stand/stone. I see nothing that I will add, change or take out of this piece. Good work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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Comment from Bobby Jo
Peace is something we have to become comfortable with in our own skin. I feel that this is talking about finding it and being ok with it.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Peace is something we have to become comfortable with in our own skin. I feel that this is talking about finding it and being ok with it.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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Comment from chasennov
The Journey Writings From the Heart 'Aspirations.' This is another one of your effectively written poems which I enjoy reading. Well done.
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The Journey Writings From the Heart 'Aspirations.' This is another one of your effectively written poems which I enjoy reading. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from freepass
it ws very good
it already has 2 ribbons
so it is good
5 very big stars
good luck with it
*****
and all your poems achieved!
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it ws very good
it already has 2 ribbons
so it is good
5 very big stars
good luck with it
*****
and all your poems achieved!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
