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Comment from melyuki
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oh how positively passionate my dear sis. you wag. what the heck will you be thinking of next sis. i dare not hold my breath in case, have a great day sis,luv and hugs from Melxxxxx

 Comment Written 18-May-2010

reply by the author on 21-May-2010
    A big thank you from your "prize fighter" sis who lost the first round with Poison Ivy ...Smiles, Sis
Comment from JW
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Hmm. I know what's on your mind. And you're right, his story does seem like it would have been more interesting.

This story was short, descriptive,and quite realistic.

Good job.
Jonathon

 Comment Written 15-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Jonathon,

    The power of the story...Guess his had a better plot.lol Thanks so much. Carol
Comment from Trybuck
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I would think real life story in the making would be much better than one trapped between the covers of a book. A bit steamy but tastefully done, Buck

 Comment Written 14-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Buck,

    A little spice only sweetens the meal...Thanks for the gracious comments. Carol
Comment from Sasha
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Again, this would have been a great entry for the contest. I got a real kick out of this one. Sorry you missed the deadline, this is one I definitely would have voted for. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Sasha,

    Thank you for the continued support and all your kindness. I truly appreciate it. Smiles, Carol
Comment from mtngalofnc
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Hi Begin Again,

You do a terrific job of these short stories. Sensual and spicy with another bit of humor. A perfect ending. Thank you for sharing.
Becky

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Becky,

    The spice of life adds flavor to the writing and your generous review adds some to mine. Thank you...Carol
Comment from Judian James
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I enjoyed both of these so much Carol. This one was really fun and so typical within a loving relationship to have a little fun with the spice = "the perfect story"! excellent writing

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Jude,

    Yes, too often we let the mundane take over our lives and forget about the spice. Thank you...Carol
Comment from BethShelby
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This is funny and and it would be frustrating to have some one get you excited and then stop in the middle and say "Sorry, go back to what you were doing. I'm sure the book would have lost its interest. A good story in few words!

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Beth,

    Thank you for the continued support and all your kindness. I truly appreciate it. Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
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Your words provided a bird's eye view to this couple in bed. You have all the elements of a story in very few words. I like the twist on the word story.

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Eliz,

    Thanks for enjoying the short story. It was a fun write and I am glad you thought the same about the rea. Smiles, Carol
Comment from hotstuff
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Very saucy! You had me smiling again. I great little story that once again starts with a typical scenario we can all relate to and ends up with a romantic ending we an all sigh over.

 Comment Written 13-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    hotstuff,

    As usual, I am far behind on my thank yous, but plugging away. I appreciate lyour time and comments...Carol
Comment from Rama Rao
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I can't believe a prolific and regular writer like you missed the deadline for the contest. It could have been a sure winner.
Now, as a normal story and not micro fiction it is perhaps not all that perfect. Don't fret, as there is no perfect woman or man, there is no perfect story.
I concede you tried hard to spin one.

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Ramarao,

    Not exactly missed it...I was gone from the site for a family emergency and when I returned it was filled...Too late to join, but never too late to write. Carol