Peter Parrot
A Heavenly Plot11 total reviews
Comment from kylielynn
A nice, fun poem. And you used all of the words. A good job. Thank you. Best of luck in the contest and in your future writings.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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A nice, fun poem. And you used all of the words. A good job. Thank you. Best of luck in the contest and in your future writings.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Thank you Kylielynnm, for your warm review and generous rating.
Comment from adewpearl
Marijke, you have incorporated all the contest words well into this fun take on the contest prompt - it is nice to see you just kick back and enjoy this one :-) Good luck in the contest. Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Marijke, you have incorporated all the contest words well into this fun take on the contest prompt - it is nice to see you just kick back and enjoy this one :-) Good luck in the contest. Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Hi Brooke, thank you. Just a little bit of fun. Enjoyed doing something silly. Warmest regards.
Comment from daniela.albu
Your poem managed to portray a greedy parrot and has humor and a musicality of its own. The name of the Parrot making a title using alliteration, contributes to the fun of the poem
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Your poem managed to portray a greedy parrot and has humor and a musicality of its own. The name of the Parrot making a title using alliteration, contributes to the fun of the poem
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Hi Daniela, thank you. A bit of fun and a giggle. Poor Peter Parrot. But what a way to go!
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
I know who wrote this, you Tasmanian gal. Your waxing poetic on the page. This gets my vote. Cool art work and presentation. Is that your bird imposed in the photo? Excellent use of the required words. Great narrative and vivid imagery. I loved the lines:
Peter Parrot
Laughs out loud
He beat the heat
Hidden amongst the wheat
Clever tale of a Parrot being greedy. Good luck in the voting booth. You're up against some darned good poetry, my friend. . .Melissa!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Poet,
I know who wrote this, you Tasmanian gal. Your waxing poetic on the page. This gets my vote. Cool art work and presentation. Is that your bird imposed in the photo? Excellent use of the required words. Great narrative and vivid imagery. I loved the lines:
Peter Parrot
Laughs out loud
He beat the heat
Hidden amongst the wheat
Clever tale of a Parrot being greedy. Good luck in the voting booth. You're up against some darned good poetry, my friend. . .Melissa!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Hi Melissa, yes I am. But I had fun putting this together. Short and sweet. No not my parrot, borrowed him from Cipart. Thanks Melissa. Warmest regards - you dont know who!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a very succinct entry, using all the required words by the contest in a quick, fun sequence. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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This is a very succinct entry, using all the required words by the contest in a quick, fun sequence. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Hi Jeanie, thank you for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards,
Comment from kintesiegel
This is interesting but I would like to know why the parrot is guilty of greed. since you don'[t explain it in any way it doesn't make sense to me.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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This is interesting but I would like to know why the parrot is guilty of greed. since you don'[t explain it in any way it doesn't make sense to me.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Hi kintesiegel, thank you for your kind review and generous rating. He is eyeing off to eat all the wheat - greed. Warmest regards,
Comment from DrJane
This poem is a hoot~~or should I say a "squawk"! Just delightful. You did well with the word challenge. I too thank you for the artwork--delightful as well.
Blessings,
Jane
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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This poem is a hoot~~or should I say a "squawk"! Just delightful. You did well with the word challenge. I too thank you for the artwork--delightful as well.
Blessings,
Jane
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Hi Jane, thank you for your fun review and generous rating. Warmest regards, squawk!
Comment from NadiaScrieva
Cute artwork! The poetry is a bit choppy though, as I'm sure you know. Not enough effort put into the piece, but I know it's challenging to do these kinds of contests. Excellent effort!
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Cute artwork! The poetry is a bit choppy though, as I'm sure you know. Not enough effort put into the piece, but I know it's challenging to do these kinds of contests. Excellent effort!
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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I put in a lot of effort to come up with those words in such a short succinct poem. I don't agree with you that it is choppy. But, you are entitled to your opinion. A three star rating cannot be an 'excellent effort'. but thanks.
Comment from sopranodebs
The artwork is very clever. The red text against the green is a bit harsh to read and defers from its joyousness. Lovely little poem. Well done, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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The artwork is very clever. The red text against the green is a bit harsh to read and defers from its joyousness. Lovely little poem. Well done, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Hi sopranodebs, thank you for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards,
Comment from Soledadpaz
I like that "he's already in heaven". Nothing bad can happen to you when you are already there. Love the artwork. A fun piece.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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I like that "he's already in heaven". Nothing bad can happen to you when you are already there. Love the artwork. A fun piece.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Hi Soledadpaz, thank you for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards,