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Comment from gramalot8
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Mystery Poet, this poem is about empty promises? Couldn't see it, couldn't feel it... couldn't understand it..... oops, there I go again, Darn, I promised never to lie in a review again.... lol..... I must tell you, n all truthfullness, you did an awesome job and I loved it. So, how true... oh, the little white lies we tell through life. Good entry for the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Your review got me the same way I got you...great job! Thank you for the chuckle and for the kind and appreciated words. Smiles to you....
Comment from dportwood
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Good luck in the Micro Fiction contest entry.

I like the way this story unfolds to reveal a fiv-year-old boy making an empty (although sincere) promise to his mommy. Well done.

Duane

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you so much for enhoying....