Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Afraid of the Dark"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
36 total reviews
Comment from patwannabe
Carol, I give you one of my very rare sixes. This is adorable. That last line is priceless and that's where the six came from.
Very clever. Such a simple solution to an age-old dilemma. Top-notch. pat
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Carol, I give you one of my very rare sixes. This is adorable. That last line is priceless and that's where the six came from.
Very clever. Such a simple solution to an age-old dilemma. Top-notch. pat
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Pat,
Your kindness brightened my day...something I so needed. Thank you...Carol
Comment from jadapenn
A cuddly monster named Fred. lol. I loved this flash fiction. This kid really worships his father - "Any friend of dad's is a friend of mine." This says it all.
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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A cuddly monster named Fred. lol. I loved this flash fiction. This kid really worships his father - "Any friend of dad's is a friend of mine." This says it all.
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Jada,
I remember this monster that belonged to my son so well...He even bought its twin at a garage sale after he gre up...just because of the memories. Smiles, CArol
Comment from vandawalker
I wish I had saved my daughter's lion instread of throwing it away. This is such a sweet story with an answer for scaring monsters away at night. Good writing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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I wish I had saved my daughter's lion instread of throwing it away. This is such a sweet story with an answer for scaring monsters away at night. Good writing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Vandawalker,
Sorry for being so far behind...had to steal a few minutes this morning to thank everyone. I truly appreciate your encouragement and constant support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from RebelRose
I enjoyed this story albeit short. Very good micro-fiction. Unique way to calm a child's fear of the dark. Very good story.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this story albeit short. Very good micro-fiction. Unique way to calm a child's fear of the dark. Very good story.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Patti,
My son cherished this monster for years and years..Thank you for the kind review...Carol
Comment from dmjones
This is sweet. It was thoughtful of Daddy to keep Fred all these years and pass him down just when his son needed him. Very good flash fiction - no errors.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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This is sweet. It was thoughtful of Daddy to keep Fred all these years and pass him down just when his son needed him. Very good flash fiction - no errors.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Donna,
My son had this dear monster for years...bought another one at a garage sale when he was grown up..just for the memories. Smiles, CArol
Comment from adewpearl
What a cute interpretation of the cuddly monsters theme - I love how much children trust their parents and "fall" for such things. Nice dialogue and a warm, loving, family atmosphere created in such few words, Carol :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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What a cute interpretation of the cuddly monsters theme - I love how much children trust their parents and "fall" for such things. Nice dialogue and a warm, loving, family atmosphere created in such few words, Carol :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Brooke,
This adorable creature was cherished by my son and later when he grew up he bought one at a garage sale just for the memories. Thanks...Carol
Comment from fionageorge
Carol, how cute is this one? Any friend of Dad's is a friend of mine. That is so good.
I enjoyed this little FF. It met all the FF criteria, and you told us a wonderful Flash Fiction in 110 words.
And what about that artwork? Works well with this.
Thanks for sharing, Carol, and warmest regards, hugs and smiles, Marijke
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Carol, how cute is this one? Any friend of Dad's is a friend of mine. That is so good.
I enjoyed this little FF. It met all the FF criteria, and you told us a wonderful Flash Fiction in 110 words.
And what about that artwork? Works well with this.
Thanks for sharing, Carol, and warmest regards, hugs and smiles, Marijke
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Marijke,
This adorable creature was cherished by my son and later when he grew up he bought one at a garage sale just for the memories. Thanks...Carol
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Carol,
What a sweet story and what a good idea for comforting a child who is in fear of those nightly monsters. Great story and you did a good job in writing this micro-fiction. I wish I had the 6 stars for this one. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Hi Carol,
What a sweet story and what a good idea for comforting a child who is in fear of those nightly monsters. Great story and you did a good job in writing this micro-fiction. I wish I had the 6 stars for this one. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
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Becky,
My son cherished his monster for years...Great little memories. Smiles, CArol
Comment from misscookie
Loved the artwork just looking into the child's eyes you sense he fear.
You capture it all in your story
This is a good story for a children book.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Loved the artwork just looking into the child's eyes you sense he fear.
You capture it all in your story
This is a good story for a children book.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Cookie,
Thanks for being there...Smiles, Carol
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thank you very much how are you and yours doing"
Comment from hotstuff
Aahh, this is lovely. So cute and so believable too. It brings back old memories of my youngest daughter's fears of the dark when she was a child. Those cuddly toys work wonders don't they?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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Aahh, this is lovely. So cute and so believable too. It brings back old memories of my youngest daughter's fears of the dark when she was a child. Those cuddly toys work wonders don't they?
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2010
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hotstuff,
My son loved his cherished monster and in later years bought one at a garage sale just for the memories. Smiles, CArol
