Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Master of Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
28 total reviews
Comment from estabuttons
Love it! As I have said before...you inspire me and break down the wall that I have built around myself. Thank you so much,
Kristine
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Love it! As I have said before...you inspire me and break down the wall that I have built around myself. Thank you so much,
Kristine
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Thank you again for your great review and I'm so glad my poem inspired your heart. Love and prayers! Sarah
Comment from adewpearl
Your quatrains have a steady cadence and strong rhyming couplets, and your spiritual message of God's love is expressed with a genuine tone of appreciation and admiration - there certainly is no greater love than the love expressed here. Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Your quatrains have a steady cadence and strong rhyming couplets, and your spiritual message of God's love is expressed with a genuine tone of appreciation and admiration - there certainly is no greater love than the love expressed here. Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you Brooke for your wonderful and encouraging review of my poem for I'm greatly honoured. Sarah
Comment from Gungalo
A beautiful write of spiritual nature and love. You have a real handle on what it means and where it comes from. Lovely verses that flow like the brook you spoke of. Only one thing could make this better poet. If you personify it completely with the word "I". You start with I and end with "we".
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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A beautiful write of spiritual nature and love. You have a real handle on what it means and where it comes from. Lovely verses that flow like the brook you spoke of. Only one thing could make this better poet. If you personify it completely with the word "I". You start with I and end with "we".
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm greatly honoured. And yes your comment is good, I'll check it out! Sarah
Comment from mumsyone
This is a nice testimony of your faith. It has a good title, and the picture is beautiful. Your rhyme and meter are good. I'm glad I came across this one for review.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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This is a nice testimony of your faith. It has a good title, and the picture is beautiful. Your rhyme and meter are good. I'm glad I came across this one for review.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review of my poem. I'm greatly honoured. I'm also glad you found me! Sarah
Comment from Laraslife
Nice one of writing in without His true name of many languages!
I don't know how to review this but it does capture my soul as I read things like this when no one mentions his name and if one cannot figure out who it is then they are the ones who are in need of guidance of the better path to the eternal life!
Good job!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Nice one of writing in without His true name of many languages!
I don't know how to review this but it does capture my soul as I read things like this when no one mentions his name and if one cannot figure out who it is then they are the ones who are in need of guidance of the better path to the eternal life!
Good job!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your great review, and I'm glad it touched your soul the way you describe. I like your thoughts about my poem! Sarah
Comment from Gooloom
"It is love of the rarest kind"--must be since you write with so much of passion. Good verse, noble content aptly put together. Your spiritual love seems to have an extention in physical love and you are grateful for having experienced it. A rare fulfilment indeed. very fluid lines with a lot of meaning. Gooloom
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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"It is love of the rarest kind"--must be since you write with so much of passion. Good verse, noble content aptly put together. Your spiritual love seems to have an extention in physical love and you are grateful for having experienced it. A rare fulfilment indeed. very fluid lines with a lot of meaning. Gooloom
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Thank you Gooloom fro your truthful and deep understanding of my poem and your splendid review. Sarah
Comment from singersun
I really like this poem. The rhymes flow with ease throughout this spiritual poem. Love really can be complete and whole! Love should be unconditional and without boundaries!
~Singersun~
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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I really like this poem. The rhymes flow with ease throughout this spiritual poem. Love really can be complete and whole! Love should be unconditional and without boundaries!
~Singersun~
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your encouraging review, gives me joy. Love, Sarah
Comment from CodyJack
I agree that love gives your spirit and soul wings and you flew with this one in imagery and creativeness and rhythm. The meaning here is so lovely it took my breath. Awesome poem that deserves a six star. Cody
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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I agree that love gives your spirit and soul wings and you flew with this one in imagery and creativeness and rhythm. The meaning here is so lovely it took my breath. Awesome poem that deserves a six star. Cody
Comment Written 08-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you Cody for your wonderful review of six stars but really all glory to God and His awesome power. I have so little to do with it, I just wrote it down as fast as I could.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
What a beautiful spiritual poem about love...Gods' love. And what a beautiful artwork too. I loved both.
Yes, love has no boundaries expressed in apoem, it gives your soul and spirit wings...THis is true. And the love of God is like that...no boundaries; no limits; no if's; no but's..It is an eternal kind of love. It is a merciful and wonderful kind of love. It is everything. We are lucky to have His love...
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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What a beautiful spiritual poem about love...Gods' love. And what a beautiful artwork too. I loved both.
Yes, love has no boundaries expressed in apoem, it gives your soul and spirit wings...THis is true. And the love of God is like that...no boundaries; no limits; no if's; no but's..It is an eternal kind of love. It is a merciful and wonderful kind of love. It is everything. We are lucky to have His love...
Comment Written 08-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you dear Irene for your heartfelt review and for the six stars. I'm greatly honoured. Glad you enjoyed it.
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I'm relieved that you like it. You're really talking about God's love, right?..and anything about God is worth more than 6 stars...Thanks for sharing..
In Christ,
Irene
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Yes, Irene, He's worth a whole lot more! He's all in all!
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Yes, I know. Let's love Him day after day after day..til the end.
But, whatever we do, we cannot equal His great love for us. We are indeed so lucky. Thank you Lord.
In Christ,
irene
Comment from Ghosterb
Now this was a very enjoyable read. I loved the rhythm and overall flow of your poem. Your wording was spot on. I think you have earned a GOLD STAR my friend. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Now this was a very enjoyable read. I loved the rhythm and overall flow of your poem. Your wording was spot on. I think you have earned a GOLD STAR my friend. Nicely done!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you Ghosterb for your heartfelt review, and for the GOLD STAR... LOVELY.
