Comment from JennieClare

Excellent

We certainly do need to teach our children right and this means the majority of us. The world will only get worse if we don't. All the best in the contest with this very well written abecodarian poem. JennieClare

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2011

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem and for the good luck wishes. I am glad you liked it enough to give it 5 stars.

Joan

reply by JennieClare on 06-Feb-2011

You are most welcome. Jennie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You follow the abc format well in this poem of faith
excellent use of alliteration in the V line
I like how you don't force lines just to fit the letter
And you deliver a powerful message of faith. Brooke

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2011

Thank you for the review and kind comments

Jona

Comment from Magics02

Excellent

Wow you hit this one on the nail for sure this round. You are so correct and I applaud you for writing this. In a world that is seemingly gone mad, may we all take a step back and make sure of youth of tomorrows get the upbringing they so will need. Great job here

Blessings

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011

Thanks for such a positive review and such nice comments.

dragonpoet

reply by Magics02 on 30-Jan-2011

You are so very welcome writer

Comment from cheery blossom

Excellent

I loved this piece. The mechanics are good and your rhyming scheme is good. Your message is very good and one that I agree with wholeheartedly. Good job and god luck.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I am glad you liked it.

dragonpoet

Comment from M. Karol

Excellent

The thought is good, The floww is good too. At places I thought a comma will make things clearer.
"Seeing that if we don't stop, start"
Meaningful otherwise. Great attempt.
Madhvi

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011

Thank you for the review and all the stars. I willl check it out for possible punctuation problems.

Joan

Comment from owncreations

Average

very true words! faith is the only way one can stay find a spot of ray....in this hurried world.....curried people are getting more and more baseless ...teach the young about faith and you replace the word HATE....

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011

Thanks for the review. Since you gave it only 3 stars can you give me some hints on how it could be made better in your eyes.

dragonpoet

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

This is a very good A-Z piece of poetic art. This has a very good message relayed in its thoughts and phrases. I could find nothing to suggest for it. It was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011

Thanks for your kind review and high rating.

Joan

Comment from Lynn27

Excellent

Hello,

This is a great poem and I loved the message too. Your lines were powerful and moving while I read.

Nice job,

Lynn

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Joan

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

I think you mean Causing one to want to. This is a really interesting poem. Not only is it about the stirring of faith, but I see that each lines begins with a letter of alphabet and continues with the next. Some clever thoughts as well as impressive piece of work. Great entry for the contest.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011

Thanks for the kind comments and the high rating.

dragonpoet