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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 " One To Another"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

4 total reviews 
Comment from Magics02
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Amazing grace is what I found in this wonderful write. Why have I not read you before today is a wonder to me.This is beautifully written from line to line I so relate to it. Blessings to you new friend

Magics

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2011

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2011
    Thank you much for your effort to review this piece
reply by Magics02 on 19-Feb-2011
    I loved it! You are so welcome
Comment from Jewell McChesney
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Hi. Not too sure about the title but the body of this work is brilliant. I could picture God with a pitcher, pouring the words into your heart, as you followed through onto the page. Blessings-JJ

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2011

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
    Not the greatest quality yet... just getting back into posting. Thanks for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. WCFL
Comment from RYME4U
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This was a nice read. I love all the comparasins and the questions. You managed to keep the flow going evenly and the rhymes are good. Metaphors and similes - good, too.
Good job!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2011

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
    Thanks for your time and effort.
Comment from Yeti777
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Great piece here that is a loving testament of your faith. Excellent tempo and rhyming scheme made this an enjoyable message to read. Nicely done. Sean

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2011

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
    thank you for your time and effort