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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "-Loving You Inside Out-"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is one of those treasures all should see
Well written and clearly expressed, you have shared the quality inside yourself.

She's a fortunate soul.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2011
    JJ... "the 'she' that i vaguely see trancending through the night"

    That "she" lives in my dreams.
    Thank you for your gracious review, it was the artwork that made this piece POP! :)
reply by Jewell McChesney on 22-Feb-2011
    Well I sure know that place from where you dream and create ....God bless you as you pray yourself towards her.
Comment from The Stranger
Excellent
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love and devotion are expressed well here, no matter how many oceans you sail or mountains you climb, true love can be just over your shoulder

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
    thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from quashdog
Excellent
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People often mistake having "the hots", for love. It is not love but an infatuation and infatuations are flitting. People who enter relationships based on this false sense of love are doomed to fail in that relationship for too often they seperate claiming that,"the magic", was over. Truth is, that "magic" is only a begining point. True love you have to work for and it takes a lifetime on comitment.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
    thank you for your effort in reviewing.