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A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

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Comment from Gungalo
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To waltz in the dance of life
is akin to always smiling. It
seems we easily get the steps down
but many have trouble following instructions.
Then again, there are those of us who choose
to dance freely and openly, never hiding the
light of love's splendor.

Your write invites a special moment's
occurrence. Nothin happenstance about it at all.
Just the will to love and be loved, holding
tightly onto forever!!!

Yeah, Blue, I do love it!!!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2011


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    thank you so much, not sure why I was led to ask forthat review but your reviewsare really with only less than a handful of people on here that make the effort to connect...thanks G...smiling, happy and free. :) Your time is valuable and I thank you. (a dark write was started last night, before the nights mid, but i fell asleep as penning... soon though.)
reply by Gungalo on 02-Apr-2011
    LOL I gave up finally around 4 am and went to sleep. It's so addicting to be here and I only have the weekends off to really catch up.

    I enjoyed reading this one you!!! Finish your dark one!!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    i will finish...hopefully not too dark, lol. have a great day.
reply by Gungalo on 02-Apr-2011
    LOL don't think so. Have you read the two newest ones from themanicdude? Now there is DARK.
Comment from JW
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Nice picture. As for your poem, it's well written. And I like it because it makes one think about themselves, and how they respond to others. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2011
    Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from RebelRose
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This is so beautifully worded with a great rhyming scheme and rhythm. Smooth flow. The color scheme is simply beautiful and you did, indeed, choose the right picture to present your beautiful words.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2011
    thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.