Reviews from

Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Heart Song"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

4 total reviews 
Comment from Terry wrote
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Your afterwords are as enlightening as your poetry, and I appreciate reading both. I had to really focus on "an inversion of doubt" to let it make sense to me, but it did when I read the author note. Thank you for another inspiring truth.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
    thanks for the effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Maybe its a self-fullfilling prophesy. If you begin to doubt, doubt will steal what you left unattended.

Nicely costructed, line by line, faith to dreams and all points inbetween.

Nice read.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
    thank you for reviewing this piece.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

If we only can understand well what kind of love that comes to us...whether good, or bad, or deceiving, honest or what...then we can be sure which of these can we allow to stay and be kept forever...No regrets will happen then.

Nice piece with a unique format.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
    thank you for your effort in reviewing this piece.
reply by Irene D. Garces on 25-Feb-2011
    Thanks too for sharing.
    God Bless.
    irene
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Wow...awesome artwork, I agree

Your poetry is packed with Truth and the author's notes are as poignant as the poetry.

I just said, this past Valentine's Day, " I'd rather have the Sword of the Spirit strike me than Cupid's arrow. any day."

God bless.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2011


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2011
    JJ, you spoil me, lol, thank you so very much.God bless.
reply by Jewell McChesney on 25-Feb-2011
    If only...... ;)