Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
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6 total reviews
Comment from RebelRose
This is really beautiful. Your words embrace the beauty of the 'special' rose. Your poem flows like a symphony or a ballet. It is extremely well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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This is really beautiful. Your words embrace the beauty of the 'special' rose. Your poem flows like a symphony or a ballet. It is extremely well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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oh, gushing... thank you RebelRose, an honor to have you review it. thank you sincerely for your words.
Comment from Espresso momma
A great romantic poem, I'm not sure what Love,Spit,and shoe laces have to do with it. But as your rose, so is your love. Thanks for sharing this sweet piece.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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A great romantic poem, I'm not sure what Love,Spit,and shoe laces have to do with it. But as your rose, so is your love. Thanks for sharing this sweet piece.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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Spit, Gum and Shoelaces is the title of the collective book, lol
I am pleased to know you connected with this work.
Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from Magics02
I just love this write with all your great metaphors and the heart and soul right up there with it. I commend you and tell you this has touched my heart this morning. Great writing friend
Blessings
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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I just love this write with all your great metaphors and the heart and soul right up there with it. I commend you and tell you this has touched my heart this morning. Great writing friend
Blessings
Comment Written 26-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
I am pleased to know you connected with this work.
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I just loved it and you are so welcome
Comment from LorieS
Beautiful poem here :) Warm message of love throughout. Words flowed effortlessly together with the awesome imagery, making for a good read, well done :)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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Beautiful poem here :) Warm message of love throughout. Words flowed effortlessly together with the awesome imagery, making for a good read, well done :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
I am pleased to know you connected with this work.
Comment from Terry wrote
Sweet and sensitively written. It implies an innocence respected, not always easy to find in romance poetry. Nice even pace and very vivid visualizations. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
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Sweet and sensitively written. It implies an innocence respected, not always easy to find in romance poetry. Nice even pace and very vivid visualizations. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from artisart4u
I like this free verse poem, I had an opportunity to see a flower unfold in the morning.
You colors and picture are nice also.
Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
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I like this free verse poem, I had an opportunity to see a flower unfold in the morning.
You colors and picture are nice also.
Keep on writing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2011
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
