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Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Hydrated In Love"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

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Comment from amahra
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Boy I love that image. It look hard like wire and soft like a flower and shaped as a heart. Very unusual. I love it. A man speaking of romance, what could be more wonderful. I love your word choices, it gives the write sophistication. I love the background color of red, the color of Valentine and the bright sun yellow font. Beautiful piece of work and art. Thank you for posting.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
    thanks for your efforts in reviewing this piece.
Comment from swosugrad09
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Oh man your title is beautiful, it drew me in and kept me reading. I really liked the lines "Cascading to refresh
two heart's dry lagoons." Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
    thanks for your efforts in reviewing this piece.