Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "The Harvest Son"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
2 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Wow!
Seriously, your best piece ever, Blue~
I don't live fat ftom the wonder of creation in your chosen image. Good choice.
The words, well layed out I'm perfect form, speak a message of refinement near
and dear to this sister's soul.
My fave lines were;
How sharp must your chisel
be, oh Lord,
how accurate
is the striking of your mallet.
That you,
as the Master Artisan,
would choose my vessel
for new creation;
WOW! ( Lest I repeat myself )
Jj
edifying your Kingdom.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Wow!
Seriously, your best piece ever, Blue~
I don't live fat ftom the wonder of creation in your chosen image. Good choice.
The words, well layed out I'm perfect form, speak a message of refinement near
and dear to this sister's soul.
My fave lines were;
How sharp must your chisel
be, oh Lord,
how accurate
is the striking of your mallet.
That you,
as the Master Artisan,
would choose my vessel
for new creation;
WOW! ( Lest I repeat myself )
Jj
edifying your Kingdom.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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thank you for your time andeffort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Masons call him the Grand Architect of the Universe. I do have one suggestion. Find another color scheme. The one you've chosen is very hard on the eyes. I appreciate your reverence. Fine write. Ray.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Masons call him the Grand Architect of the Universe. I do have one suggestion. Find another color scheme. The one you've chosen is very hard on the eyes. I appreciate your reverence. Fine write. Ray.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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thank you for your time andeffort in reviewing this piece.
