Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "A Talk-less Walk"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
6 total reviews
Comment from Deorre Leonard
Fabulous job. I good read it flowed from beginning to the end. I think it is perfect as it is right now. I would recommend this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Fabulous job. I good read it flowed from beginning to the end. I think it is perfect as it is right now. I would recommend this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from ejebb1951
It is so true what you speak Blue-Stubby. Many non-Christians watch the actions of others who profess to be followers of the Christian faith. They talk the talk but don't walk the walk. Many are discouraged by what they see. We, the light, are here to encourage. Love your poetry.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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It is so true what you speak Blue-Stubby. Many non-Christians watch the actions of others who profess to be followers of the Christian faith. They talk the talk but don't walk the walk. Many are discouraged by what they see. We, the light, are here to encourage. Love your poetry.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
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My pleasure Blue
Comment from dinoscribe
I utterly and totally agree, too much talk with not enough walks do turn folk away.
We're told about Jesus, God the heavens and the angles from the minute we learn to listen. It's not often we're shown about any of these.
Just a kind word or a little understanding often opens the doors to the belief in the way things should be.
I love the way that this speaks, the tone the gentle narration.
Just the way this type of prose should be.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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I utterly and totally agree, too much talk with not enough walks do turn folk away.
We're told about Jesus, God the heavens and the angles from the minute we learn to listen. It's not often we're shown about any of these.
Just a kind word or a little understanding often opens the doors to the belief in the way things should be.
I love the way that this speaks, the tone the gentle narration.
Just the way this type of prose should be.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from Terry wrote
this is a very thought-provoking poem ... is is a bit like the poem I posted earlier this week ... suggesting actual help instead of an offer of vague hope. Walking takes more strength and stability than talking, and you make a good point here.
I like it ... I liked it before ... I don't know how I selected three stars, I thought I had clicked five. Sorry that happened. I really do like it! You might also like "Words that Will" which also addresses the walk vs. the talk.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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this is a very thought-provoking poem ... is is a bit like the poem I posted earlier this week ... suggesting actual help instead of an offer of vague hope. Walking takes more strength and stability than talking, and you make a good point here.
I like it ... I liked it before ... I don't know how I selected three stars, I thought I had clicked five. Sorry that happened. I really do like it! You might also like "Words that Will" which also addresses the walk vs. the talk.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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this piece was posted unfinished and unedited by accident, first time for everything. Please reread and rate if you are willing. Thank you.
Comment from mumsyone
Okay! Much better now! It looks great.
I like your poem, but I am confused by the word 'loud' in the second stanza. Is it supposed to be there?
It isn't always vital
to pull each aside,loud (loud?)
but more so to example
how Christians abide.
Please let me know if you change it, and I will be happy to re-read your poem.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Okay! Much better now! It looks great.
I like your poem, but I am confused by the word 'loud' in the second stanza. Is it supposed to be there?
It isn't always vital
to pull each aside,loud (loud?)
but more so to example
how Christians abide.
Please let me know if you change it, and I will be happy to re-read your poem.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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I didn't mean to post it, i wasn't done by any means... just hit the save button, first timefor everyting. The complete work is posted now, thank you.
Comment from amahra
Amen and so true. I'm now reading "A Purpose Driven Life" by Rick Warren. I haven't even finished it and already I've change for the better for God. Your writing is so real and true. It is not our words or singing in church but it is our walk or our steady work with God. Thank you for posting. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Amen and so true. I'm now reading "A Purpose Driven Life" by Rick Warren. I haven't even finished it and already I've change for the better for God. Your writing is so real and true. It is not our words or singing in church but it is our walk or our steady work with God. Thank you for posting. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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you read the unedited, unfinished version posted byaccident, i'll take the 5 stars but you may want to enjoy the finished copy, thank you... God bless.
