Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Simple Simplicity"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
3 total reviews
Comment from joan7775
I enjoyed this very much. The simplicity and blessings of enjoying simple moments and to appreciate the little moments and things in life. The rhyming was great also.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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I enjoyed this very much. The simplicity and blessings of enjoying simple moments and to appreciate the little moments and things in life. The rhyming was great also.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from Irish Rose
A good read that makes you think of things you take forgranted and that often seem simple. Great rhyme and tempo for this piece. Truly enjoyable.
Rose
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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A good read that makes you think of things you take forgranted and that often seem simple. Great rhyme and tempo for this piece. Truly enjoyable.
Rose
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your time and efforts in reviewing this piece.
Comment from RYME4U
Very nicely written. I like the questioning nature of the poem and the delightful rhyme scheme. It is well presented and beautiful in its own simplicity.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Very nicely written. I like the questioning nature of the poem and the delightful rhyme scheme. It is well presented and beautiful in its own simplicity.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your time and efforts in reviewing this piece.
