Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
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Comment from Maxine Kendall
Day dreaming were we? Well sort of - I guess you were really 'day looking'- or should I say dust looking?
You actually managed to make dust appear very interesting. I am so impressed!
Some really fine description here
Love that last line.
Well done.
Maxine
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Day dreaming were we? Well sort of - I guess you were really 'day looking'- or should I say dust looking?
You actually managed to make dust appear very interesting. I am so impressed!
Some really fine description here
Love that last line.
Well done.
Maxine
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank youfor your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from mumsyone
Isn't it amazing how things as minute as dust particles can catch and hold the attention of a writer who is just trying to get some words on paper?
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Isn't it amazing how things as minute as dust particles can catch and hold the attention of a writer who is just trying to get some words on paper?
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank youfor your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
Comment from penelope
Oh, that reminds me of a huge cobweb I spotted under the stairs today. The spiders are active this time of year. Love the poem, and the notes, especially this:
Particles of dust, that is a bit of sad reality, lol
Sorry, back to the poem: you've captured so well what it's like to be distracted by the most mundane things as we're trying to come up with a masterpiece. Penelope
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Oh, that reminds me of a huge cobweb I spotted under the stairs today. The spiders are active this time of year. Love the poem, and the notes, especially this:
Particles of dust, that is a bit of sad reality, lol
Sorry, back to the poem: you've captured so well what it's like to be distracted by the most mundane things as we're trying to come up with a masterpiece. Penelope
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
