Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

"Love endures forever!", ... of this much I am sure. YOur words ponder through the ages of a life and wonder if love will come to an end. I think it just grows stronger as the years pile up and touch the heart and soul so much!!!

This is great free verse, Blue!! I enjoyed your vignettes and the wonderful imagery each of them holds!!!!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2011

wow, i didn't think I could blush from a review but it just happened, very kind words, very thoughful and thought filled. Thanks G. a nice suprise, very few reviews dig into the perspective or message that is simply LOVE.

reply by Gungalo on 31-Mar-2011

WEll this girl always does!! LOL. My pleasure Blue!!!

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Well, I like yout 'brief, sweet vision'!
I enjoyed the way this poem 'grew' through the ages. I wonder if you contemplated starting earlier - love at twenty-five would be quite a contrast!
PS typo in your first word may be a record.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011

thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece

Comment from el twelve

Excellent

that was nicely written and asked questions that we probably all think about.
correction: first line, were should be where. thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011

thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece