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Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Swirling Hearts Find"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
3 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Instructing of girlfriend to wife guide
so tenderness doesn't get trampled.
These lines made me smile poet!!! Tell me, is there a boyfriend to husband guide too? LOL.
Enjoyed the foray through your definitions here and the culmination in your last verse into trust is truly the answer to everything.
An ambitious endeavor here and I enjoyed it!!!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2011
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Instructing of girlfriend to wife guide
so tenderness doesn't get trampled.
These lines made me smile poet!!! Tell me, is there a boyfriend to husband guide too? LOL.
Enjoyed the foray through your definitions here and the culmination in your last verse into trust is truly the answer to everything.
An ambitious endeavor here and I enjoyed it!!!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2011
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Yes, lol, it is in scripture. "Love your wife as Christ loved the church..." that a man would give his life truly...
Thanks G,an honor to have you review.
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Truly a pleasure this night!!!
Comment from mumsyone
When it comes to lust, emotions, love, and trust, you 'll never find a better guide to follow that Scripture. Well said. Good for you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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When it comes to lust, emotions, love, and trust, you 'll never find a better guide to follow that Scripture. Well said. Good for you.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing
this piece.
Comment from dinoscribe
As you stated love and trust emotions to be felt. We can feel both from the grace of Gods unconditional care.
Through his gifts and sacrifice he has shown us security, even when unrealised.
This is well written poem, beautifully phrased and rhythmically metered. I feel your choice of artwork simply emphasises the message within your poem., that even when we feel overshadow by the turmultuous journey of life, there is a light shining inside Gods heart.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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As you stated love and trust emotions to be felt. We can feel both from the grace of Gods unconditional care.
Through his gifts and sacrifice he has shown us security, even when unrealised.
This is well written poem, beautifully phrased and rhythmically metered. I feel your choice of artwork simply emphasises the message within your poem., that even when we feel overshadow by the turmultuous journey of life, there is a light shining inside Gods heart.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2011
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well said. I thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.
