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Autumn

end of an unforgettable summer

2 total reviews 
Comment from Earthwriter
Excellent
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interesting format you write Haiku in never seen it done this way but i guess it works i would recommend a photo and not putting all the words in one line

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    I had it in three seperate lines and when I submitted it it went all to one. maybe i'll try to fix it.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Good
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Nice descriptive work on the end of summer and coming fall with all the colours so vibrant and powerful all on their own.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful 5-7-5.
Good luck in the contest.
Maureen

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    thank you