Comment from
Queenise
Love the message in your poem and think it is very thought provoking as well as prophetic for all of mankind. Great imagery and pace as well as good rhymes. The art is good also. Blessings. Queenise
Comment Written 02-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
Blessings and Thank you for the review
reply by Queenise on 03-Aug-2011
Comment from
Denise S
Was that true happiness and not turn happiness? I liked the flow and the rhymes were quite nice. A rreally nice poem ,it really says a lot
Comment Written 02-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
yes Thanks I just corrected this oversight