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5:7:5 Positive thinking rewards

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Comment from Van
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The poem is good. The sculpure is great. Elliot has come to life and you've honored him by this photo and the fine 5,7,5.
Great submission.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Wow from lump to squirrel....
Positive thinking has got me doing things the doctors told me I never would.
Yes indeed my friend great and powerful poem, filled with wisdom for all.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    Thanks Bonny lass for this lbrammer review.
    The Auld yin.
Comment from Sweet Anita
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Ah! You see beauty in everything. Elliot must be so thankful that you touched him with your magic fingers and turned him into a beautiful little squirrel. Looks like he is offering you one of his acorns. :o) A wonderful job of artwork in creating Elliot and also the poem about Elliot. Good job Alex!

Nita :-)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    Ta Anita Bonny lass fur anither lovely review and for the encouragement:) I listen to your music almost every day.
    The Auld Yin.
Comment from l.raven
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WOW Alex, Glad to see you do this. And when you imagine in a positive way the rewards are endless. Love your poem and the picture is so cute. Friend Linda

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    Ta Bonny lass fur anither lovely review:)thanks also for the continueing encouragement.

    The Auld Yin.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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imagination
lovingly pursued rewards
positive thinking


how clever you are Alex...
I can do wonders with a ball
of wool, can knit for an
octapus (as my father used
to say), but can't work with
clay.

Margaret

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    We all have our own talents Margaret Bonny Lass and yours is beautiful gentle verse and mind capturing novels.
    Thanks for anither brammer review Bonny Lass.
    The Auld Yin.
Comment from TammyGail
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This was a great little jot
Few words to express much is always great
Loved your imagery as well it was perfect
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    Ta Tammy Bonny lass fur anither lovely review:)
    The Auld Yin.
Comment from adewpearl
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What a cool illustration of your artistic process, Alex :-)
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form
I like the alliterative pairing of pursued/positive and obviously, what you have to say :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    It's what I see Brooke Bonny Lass. Beauty must be advertised and what is more beautiful than all god's wee beasties.
    Ta ma Lassy fur yer continueing encouragement.
    The Auld Yin.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
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Wow Alex, that is so cute. You are very talented. I enjoyed reading your poem and your picture adds a lot of depth to your words too.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
    Ta Bonny lass fur anither lovely review as always:)
    The Auld Yin.
Comment from robina1978
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Love the art you made and the title best.
Also a not bad 5-7-5. Does not cover the title so much in my opinion.
Still worth a five.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, alex, a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the way imagination creates possibilities that forward thinking minds can't think of it. i love the squirrel. you can send it to me.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011