the winning team
a team winning a cricket match2 total reviews
Comment from randomzed
Good subject matter.
It leaves me, however, with questions?
Perhaps it is deliberate, but the reading is bumpy.
Better flow would be appreciated by some.
This is a 5-7-5?
I want to like this poem!
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Good subject matter.
It leaves me, however, with questions?
Perhaps it is deliberate, but the reading is bumpy.
Better flow would be appreciated by some.
This is a 5-7-5?
I want to like this poem!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2011
Comment from poetstar
This is a good 5 7 5 poem. You described this type of sport very well. The Cricket poem has good rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing your time and talents. I enjoyed your poem.
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This is a good 5 7 5 poem. You described this type of sport very well. The Cricket poem has good rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing your time and talents. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2011
