Come Pray With Me
I wrote this the morning after the Tsunami hit Japan2 total reviews
Comment from Trybuck
... and a wonderful poem it is but I think the experts will agree, it doesn't fit the 5/7/5 format. If I'm wrong, I apologize for it is a great poem, Buck
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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... and a wonderful poem it is but I think the experts will agree, it doesn't fit the 5/7/5 format. If I'm wrong, I apologize for it is a great poem, Buck
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. However I do not understand the 5/7/5 format. Could you explain it to me?
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Three line poem --First line five syllables -- second line seven syllables and third line five syllables.... Hope this helps, Buck
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Yes it does.. thank you so much for getting back to me Buck.. Deb
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No Problem, It was a very basic description. Poetry Dances may be able to help you more, Buck
Comment from Janie King
I'm not a real history or geography buff..I don't ever remember learning about a tsunami but it is absolutely one of the most devastating, so to say natural disasters that I ever saw. It was a time, now is a time where we all need to ban together to help our needy as well as the needy in other countries.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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I'm not a real history or geography buff..I don't ever remember learning about a tsunami but it is absolutely one of the most devastating, so to say natural disasters that I ever saw. It was a time, now is a time where we all need to ban together to help our needy as well as the needy in other countries.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you Janie. I am not a history buff either. When the earth quake caused the Tsunami to hit Japan earlier this year I was inspired to write this poem. I appreciate your comment very much.
