Pain
im more of a long poetry writer3 total reviews
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Well, this was really sad. I guess that is the sign of a well-written poem, because it truly just pulled me right down. I hope that you, personally, have not had such a downer. Although I realize, to write such a poem, you would have had to had such an experience. Well done!
Susan
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Well, this was really sad. I guess that is the sign of a well-written poem, because it truly just pulled me right down. I hope that you, personally, have not had such a downer. Although I realize, to write such a poem, you would have had to had such an experience. Well done!
Susan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
Comment from michaelrandolph
Very peotic verse concerning the downfall of someone soul in the attack of another human. Very interesting Haiku for the contest.
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Very peotic verse concerning the downfall of someone soul in the attack of another human. Very interesting Haiku for the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
Comment from LisaSilva
It sounds like you lost everything and gave your dear soul over to the wrong person. I hope, if this is autobiographical, that you have found a way to separate yourself from this soul sucking person. Love, Lisa
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It sounds like you lost everything and gave your dear soul over to the wrong person. I hope, if this is autobiographical, that you have found a way to separate yourself from this soul sucking person. Love, Lisa
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012