Poetry Dances
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Comment from Gungalo
This is a fine write, Ameen. It shows that what we think of can be brought down like a rock. It takes persistence to climb up and remain there. Sigh. Wonderful style.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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This is a fine write, Ameen. It shows that what we think of can be brought down like a rock. It takes persistence to climb up and remain there. Sigh. Wonderful style.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Gunga my friend, this means a lot to me my friend, I appreciate your encouraging review, thank you very much.
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Smiles.
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for digging up a lesser-used form for this creation. I liked the way you personalized the second stanza and added more of your whimsy at the end. My favorite device is your personification, as the "virgin paper" and the "mighty pen" "caress each other." -Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thanks for digging up a lesser-used form for this creation. I liked the way you personalized the second stanza and added more of your whimsy at the end. My favorite device is your personification, as the "virgin paper" and the "mighty pen" "caress each other." -Joan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Joan my friend, it was you who introduced this form a while ago and I got hooked, appreciate your wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Spitfire
I like the opposing Etherees. Pen and virgin paper caress each other. Ooh, shows anything can be seduced. LOL. Great image of imagination twirling sky-high and then brought back to earth by gravity. What a bummer!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I like the opposing Etherees. Pen and virgin paper caress each other. Ooh, shows anything can be seduced. LOL. Great image of imagination twirling sky-high and then brought back to earth by gravity. What a bummer!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Hello Spitfire, glad you like the poem my friend, thank you very much.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, ameen.
Sincere thanks for my first time exposure to this form. I adore the poem, and it's humble and humerous conclusion. This is so true for me too ... I guess for many!
The first stanza is like a love poem to poetry. You use the required tools with flair!
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Hello, ameen.
Sincere thanks for my first time exposure to this form. I adore the poem, and it's humble and humerous conclusion. This is so true for me too ... I guess for many!
The first stanza is like a love poem to poetry. You use the required tools with flair!
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Rebecca my friend, it was Joan E. who first posted this form a while ago and I tried to give a try, glad you like it, thank you very much.
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Can't imagine how i would miss her post. maybe I just did not remember??? Anyway you did a great job. Hugs.
Comment from Peter@Poole
So clever, so well-contrived. This is a new form for me, my friend, so I must not even try to suggest improvements. I can't anyway, because one needs to write them oneself in order to fully understand the requirements. You are going great guns. Peter
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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So clever, so well-contrived. This is a new form for me, my friend, so I must not even try to suggest improvements. I can't anyway, because one needs to write them oneself in order to fully understand the requirements. You are going great guns. Peter
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Peter my friend, I always appreciate and respect your reviews/expert comments, I am grateful to you sir, thank you very much.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for a double etheree
I like how you refer back to the first stanza in your second stanza, like with the mention of the virgin/blank paper
A thoughtful look at the poetic creative process in solid etheree form :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for a double etheree
I like how you refer back to the first stanza in your second stanza, like with the mention of the virgin/blank paper
A thoughtful look at the poetic creative process in solid etheree form :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Brooke my friend, I am delighted to read your encouraging comments, thank you very much.
Comment from Hareem.S
WHOA! What a great and powerful poem! You word choice is so apt and the expression you have used portay a very vivid image. I absolutey love this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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WHOA! What a great and powerful poem! You word choice is so apt and the expression you have used portay a very vivid image. I absolutey love this poem.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hello again beti, I am delighted you like the poem, appreciate your wonderful and generous review, thank you very much. God bless you.
Comment from rashi kumar
This is such a wonderful poem,
I really like the structure,
a ten syllabled line followed by an inverted nonet!
Very well-written!
I like the imagery
'Let them caress each other'
Pleasure to read and review!!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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This is such a wonderful poem,
I really like the structure,
a ten syllabled line followed by an inverted nonet!
Very well-written!
I like the imagery
'Let them caress each other'
Pleasure to read and review!!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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rashi beti, thank you very much and a very happy "Republic Day"
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Welcome! Wishing you a very Happy Republic day too!
Comment from Kingsland
I f you have just recently launched yourself into this field of poetry. You are doing really well, as this is just an excellent piece of poetry on writing such. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I f you have just recently launched yourself into this field of poetry. You are doing really well, as this is just an excellent piece of poetry on writing such. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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John my friend, it's a honor and a huge encouragement for me to read your kind review, I appreciate it sir, thank you very much.
Comment from artemis53
Excellent. I truly enjoyed the way that you put a twist onto the end of this palindrome poem. It was so subtle yet fun. I don't know if it's the purest way to write this poetry but, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Excellent. I truly enjoyed the way that you put a twist onto the end of this palindrome poem. It was so subtle yet fun. I don't know if it's the purest way to write this poetry but, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hello artemis, my friend, I am glad you like the poem, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
