Decent fighting
A Septolet (short)26 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your septolet that really does shift in meaning from the first to the second stanza--not everyone includes that feature in their work. Your contemporary picture adds another dimension, -Joan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I enjoyed your septolet that really does shift in meaning from the first to the second stanza--not everyone includes that feature in their work. Your contemporary picture adds another dimension, -Joan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend and take care, Ine
Comment from elgone
I gather the message from the cartoon cell. Our modern world has a violent culture and that is largely attributable to the entertainment media's desire to hold the attention of the young long enough that marketers can pitch their bauble, beads and sugar coated whatever. It was a very different world in which we grew up. The power of the modern media was still developing. News preempted entertainment programming. Now news is a form of entertainment unto itself.
E
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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I gather the message from the cartoon cell. Our modern world has a violent culture and that is largely attributable to the entertainment media's desire to hold the attention of the young long enough that marketers can pitch their bauble, beads and sugar coated whatever. It was a very different world in which we grew up. The power of the modern media was still developing. News preempted entertainment programming. Now news is a form of entertainment unto itself.
E
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Robina You must do something special to make your picture so huge ( what is your secret?)
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Yes words can indeed be more powerful than hand combat.
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Hello Robina You must do something special to make your picture so huge ( what is your secret?)
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Yes words can indeed be more powerful than hand combat.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Sometimes they come out like this when I take them from Photobucket.com
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I use photo bucket and no nice big pictures yet!
Gert
Comment from Charlene0513
To robina1978,
A growing concept of how many disputes are handled but when people listen when spoken to and heed the advice given there would be a lot less quarrels.
In most Septolets there are 15 words, divided in two.
Charlene
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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To robina1978,
A growing concept of how many disputes are handled but when people listen when spoken to and heed the advice given there would be a lot less quarrels.
In most Septolets there are 15 words, divided in two.
Charlene
Comment Written 23-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thanks ever so much for your kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Matoshka
I really enjoyed the picture and the message in your words. fighting is not positive and hurts others so, but being decent with your words is so positive. Blessings my friend
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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I really enjoyed the picture and the message in your words. fighting is not positive and hurts others so, but being decent with your words is so positive. Blessings my friend
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
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You are so welcome Ine. Blessings
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Good point! This is quite amusing, yet at the same time carries a good message. Although my brother and I would fight like cat and dog. LOL! Well done, Ine. Love the artwork! Av
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Good point! This is quite amusing, yet at the same time carries a good message. Although my brother and I would fight like cat and dog. LOL! Well done, Ine. Love the artwork! Av
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. We really were not allowed to, nor curse.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Wow...this is just superb, Ine. You're, as they say, on a roll. I really admire how you made such a powerful statement with so few words. And, though I rarely comment on the accompanying artwork, your picture choice was inspired. Great job! Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Wow...this is just superb, Ine. You're, as they say, on a roll. I really admire how you made such a powerful statement with so few words. And, though I rarely comment on the accompanying artwork, your picture choice was inspired. Great job! Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
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My pleasure, Ine.
Comment from Tonulak
hi Robina,
Good use of the form and you put forth an interesting message. Is fighting with rough words better than kicks and scratches? An interesting concept. Nice job--Ted
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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hi Robina,
Good use of the form and you put forth an interesting message. Is fighting with rough words better than kicks and scratches? An interesting concept. Nice job--Ted
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from adewpearl
I love your illustration
Your poem is in good word count and line count for the septolet
Your second section finishes the point you are making well, as you move from emphasizing not physically fighting to instead fighting more decently with words :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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I love your illustration
Your poem is in good word count and line count for the septolet
Your second section finishes the point you are making well, as you move from emphasizing not physically fighting to instead fighting more decently with words :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from FlamingSpade
You are so right! My Ma always told me "sticks and stones can break my bones, but words will never hurt me!" Thanks for taking me down memory lane Ine!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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You are so right! My Ma always told me "sticks and stones can break my bones, but words will never hurt me!" Thanks for taking me down memory lane Ine!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Think quite a few of us were taught this Ginger.
