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Comment from DeannaRoss
Hi there,
I gave you a three star rating because of syllable count errors --
Your poem is 5-6-6 -- adds up to the same but I think you'd have to put "and" at the end of line 2, with line 3 reading "I like dogs better".
I'm not sure I understood the poem -- something is vaguely humorous about it with the allusion to a cats' 9 lives, but I still didn't totally get it.
Could be my fault!
I do like the title!
Best wishes to you,
Deanna
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Hi there,
I gave you a three star rating because of syllable count errors --
Your poem is 5-6-6 -- adds up to the same but I think you'd have to put "and" at the end of line 2, with line 3 reading "I like dogs better".
I'm not sure I understood the poem -- something is vaguely humorous about it with the allusion to a cats' 9 lives, but I still didn't totally get it.
Could be my fault!
I do like the title!
Best wishes to you,
Deanna
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
Comment from Marie Salerno
I like this ... seems utterly impossible to write anything about anything in a 5-7-5 ... but I'm an animal person (cats & dogs:) so the theme was catching. Poor cat seems to have used up its nine lives:)
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I like this ... seems utterly impossible to write anything about anything in a 5-7-5 ... but I'm an animal person (cats & dogs:) so the theme was catching. Poor cat seems to have used up its nine lives:)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
