Temporary Insanity
A wannabe writer loses it.27 total reviews
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Shari
After all the Baker Act stuff I've been writing you could have possibly guessed I would be interested in your Flash Fiction. I think one or two of our famous writers would have ended up Baker Acted if they had been alive today.
Good luck in the contest.
Ron xx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Hi Shari
After all the Baker Act stuff I've been writing you could have possibly guessed I would be interested in your Flash Fiction. I think one or two of our famous writers would have ended up Baker Acted if they had been alive today.
Good luck in the contest.
Ron xx
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks for you good wishes Ron. A lot of famous writers had issues, that's for sure. Sharixx
Comment from joann r romei
Very, very funny , We think alike, This is my type of humor, Yet I think you can come up with a better last line, the kicker sentence or is this going to continue, then it is fine, enjoyed it and can relate
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Very, very funny , We think alike, This is my type of humor, Yet I think you can come up with a better last line, the kicker sentence or is this going to continue, then it is fine, enjoyed it and can relate
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Okay, I'll give a thought to the last line. Thanks for mentioning.
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a very well written and funny short story. Good to know that it is fiction. But I can understand the temporary insanity. Good luck in the contest.
"Tough to lose someone you love. - need end quote
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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This is a very well written and funny short story. Good to know that it is fiction. But I can understand the temporary insanity. Good luck in the contest.
"Tough to lose someone you love. - need end quote
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks for catching the spag. Caught another typo while at it. Appreciate the stars.
Comment from michaelrandolph
For a flash, this is a very interesting and sorry to say comical story concerning the depression we all feel as writer's at times. Have to say I caught myself laughing as many of us have wanted to scream at the retarded editors at times. Excellent.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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For a flash, this is a very interesting and sorry to say comical story concerning the depression we all feel as writer's at times. Have to say I caught myself laughing as many of us have wanted to scream at the retarded editors at times. Excellent.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks, Michael. Fun to make something quite serious into a comedy. But that helps us get through.
Comment from tweiser
great story! and, sadly, so very true.....especially the temporarily part, LOL. just a teeny bit of spag....1 too many apostrophe's around the 't' in 'you can't suffocate yourself'; no quotation mark after 'tough to lose someone you love'; and, did you mean 'bared your teeth' instead of 'barred your teeth'? thanks for the read. tommie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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great story! and, sadly, so very true.....especially the temporarily part, LOL. just a teeny bit of spag....1 too many apostrophe's around the 't' in 'you can't suffocate yourself'; no quotation mark after 'tough to lose someone you love'; and, did you mean 'bared your teeth' instead of 'barred your teeth'? thanks for the read. tommie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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THanks, Tommie. I got the two spags you first mentioned. And you're right about about bared.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
In fact, Death by Degrees, had been written <<< Remove those commas... they are misplaced, spag
This is well written with plenty of humor. Really enjoyed it! Great contest entry.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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In fact, Death by Degrees, had been written <<< Remove those commas... they are misplaced, spag
This is well written with plenty of humor. Really enjoyed it! Great contest entry.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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See, I know there was a reason I nominated you. Thanks for noting and for the great stars.
Comment from janalma
Good and exciting write. Poor writer. What a good put-down when he made the comment about apple pie. Sad state of affairs, but it was humorous anyway. Spelling error-barred for bared my teeth. Good. Funny.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Good and exciting write. Poor writer. What a good put-down when he made the comment about apple pie. Sad state of affairs, but it was humorous anyway. Spelling error-barred for bared my teeth. Good. Funny.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks janal. Someone else caught that error too, so I sit corrected. LOL.Glad you enjoyed.
