The English Assignment
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Devil lives in Mastic part B."The author tells a tale how he tried to better him
5 total reviews
Comment from ulster3
Hi, keimosobie,
This is very interesting and held my attention all the way through. I must find time to go back and read more. Very frightening to think about.
Warmly Rebecca
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2012
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Hi, keimosobie,
This is very interesting and held my attention all the way through. I must find time to go back and read more. Very frightening to think about.
Warmly Rebecca
Comment Written 24-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2012
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thankyou.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Very very interesting. i wouldn't know what to make of it either, and I would also be afraid. That's just not something you want to hear. So strange. I'll be reading on. This was captivating.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Very very interesting. i wouldn't know what to make of it either, and I would also be afraid. That's just not something you want to hear. So strange. I'll be reading on. This was captivating.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you scarlet. I hope I wont dissapoint.
Comment from TammyGail
That's one hell of a story...
and well you crafted a obscure chapter
with your experiences..do i believe you
well sure I've plenty of stories i don't dare tell
people may deem me mad..but that's beside the point I'm already crazy ..lol
i like that you laid it out on the line
if anyone says your weird or crazy
well just tell em to kiss your ass..
great read and thanks for sharing
i look forward to reading the next
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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That's one hell of a story...
and well you crafted a obscure chapter
with your experiences..do i believe you
well sure I've plenty of stories i don't dare tell
people may deem me mad..but that's beside the point I'm already crazy ..lol
i like that you laid it out on the line
if anyone says your weird or crazy
well just tell em to kiss your ass..
great read and thanks for sharing
i look forward to reading the next
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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thanks tammy glad you liked it.
Comment from FlorrieFan
You tell your story with drama and strength. Emotion comes through. It is a good story. I did wonder what would happen next.
It might be good to put in a few details, I think. about the setting, just to set the mood.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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You tell your story with drama and strength. Emotion comes through. It is a good story. I did wonder what would happen next.
It might be good to put in a few details, I think. about the setting, just to set the mood.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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okay thanks. I wanted to keep it real so I didnt want to cloud the story with too many details. but thanks ill consider it.
Comment from Rob Caudle
This was an interesting read. A bit short but you did leave us hanging. So I will follow along for a while and see where this leads. Thanks for this interesting post. I may go back and try to catch up with the story latter this week.
Only one little thing.
He told me not to say anything to you." he said.... he said is not necessary here
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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This was an interesting read. A bit short but you did leave us hanging. So I will follow along for a while and see where this leads. Thanks for this interesting post. I may go back and try to catch up with the story latter this week.
Only one little thing.
He told me not to say anything to you." he said.... he said is not necessary here
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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okay thank you i will fix it.
