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The author tells a tale how he tried to better him

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Comment from ulster3
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Hello,keimosobie.
The last chapter I read had a note saying it was true. This chapter is listed under fiction. Is each chapter different in that regard?
Warmly, Rebecca

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2012
    thanks for the heads up.
Comment from lyssa777
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this was a good story. I was kept interested by your choice of wording. You dialogue was believable,and your descriptive words kept me interested.I enjoyed the part the main part of the story how you met your wife. I to believe that people are placed in your life for reasons as good or bad. I also feel you could of made your ending a little different to keep the story going good job

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
    thanks ill keep it going
Comment from TammyGail
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Wow..Sounds like you really had a hard time
back than getting back and forth to work
I'm sure that was hell hitch hiking and than
all the shit heads stealing all the time
and loved hearing how you meet your wife
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
    thanks Tammy