Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like this poem very much I enjoyed reading it very well written and I like the picture it enhanced the poem good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

Thanks for reading and enjoying.

Comment from steevie

Excellent

Very touching poem, Christina. You have faith in God, which is rare these days. Paradise is just around the corner for those who do God's will.

steve

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thanks for enjoying my poem. Yes, Thy Kingdom Come on earth as it is in heaven. It takes Jesus death on the cross for our sins to be forgiven and for us to cross the line at the end of the race, but I'm sure you know that.
love in Him
Christina 201

reply by steevie on 16-Sep-2012

you're very welcome, christina

steve

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Nice spiritual message, reminding us all to accept one another, believing in the power of God's love and guidance to lead us into goodness;
"That God's love is real;
As it flows from our hearts
And becomes their next meal"--a lovely finish to a message we should take time to heed;

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

What a thoughtful look at what it means to follow God's word with those small acts of kindness that are God's will.
Excellent use of provocative questions to engage the reader
excellent use of occasional rhyme :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thanks for reading my poem and liking it. God is an ever present help to me. I hope you can draw comfort from Him too.
Regards
Robyn

Comment from bossladyone

Excellent

I love this poem. Expresses what God expects form us as his children. It is well written and flows very nice. The picture and the color scheme are nice too. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you for reading and liking my poem. God is good.

Comment from rgabel

Excellent

Excellent message, clear and loud. Flow was nice, pulling me right into the next line. Clean and crisp. Good balance. Nice rhythm. I enjoyed this so much I read it three time. Very good job.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you so much for such a lovely review. Bless you.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem Christina it was well written and expressed in free flow - excellent use of imagery adorning your ink - thanks for sharing as well as your notes and best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you for your kind review and your best wishes.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

hello Christina, I am sorry I have missed your lovely poetry, this one is amazing. I am going to fan you so I get them in future. I went into my profile for the first time in ages and saw your kind message about my book being published, thank you for that! I always forget to look on there!! Any way this is an excellent faith poem, and a real pleaure to read. Sandra xsx

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thanks again, very kind.

Comment from Bindu Saxena

Excellent

These are great words!Every person, old or young should imbibe in their character.This poem would be very useful to teach our young children about kindness and importance of good words.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2012

Thank you for reading and reviewing and seeing worth in my poem
Regards
Robyn (Christina 201)

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

I like spiritual content of spiritual reasons spiritual thoughts, not necessarily religious thoughts I'm not religious but I am spiritual I have respect any religion. Because the bottom line is the foundation spiritual and well-intentioned this was a great poem well done Alexander

I thought that this was great focusing on the natural ability beauty of nature, and all that it provides us and how well it serves us just to see and looking at.I thought this was compassionate and insightfulness, love the flow and their emotional content, and the use of metaphors were interesting. Love is a crazy game, sometimes almost like of musical chairs use it will one you like but something breaks it apart in the game starts again I enjoyed your thoughts of the subject and found it to be very authentic. This is kind of a free-flowing poem I like the structure and flow of words and ideas that are within poetic boundaries Good insights, I like the originality I enjoyed reading your work short I thought this was a good piece of poetry nice haiku very thoughtful very colorful, I thought it was very creative and very thought-provoking, imagery excellent, Good piece of work, very well done Good insights, I like the originality of this piece very well said about life a nice flow, very enjoyable, I like the description enjoyed your poetic expression. Io vividly done I thought it was very creative and very thought-provoking, imagery excellent Good piece of work, good picture very well done. I thought it was a bit cryptic yet but provoking Good insights, visual piece, and I love the inward thinking, There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2012

Thank you for your kind review of my poem. Thank you for finding merit in it.