A Wind Chime
A gift In Memory, see author's notes31 total reviews
Comment from reconciled
Loved your poem fair lady
your gooooood
you know how to make words dance....
not everyone can love Michael oh great picture to accompany
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Loved your poem fair lady
your gooooood
you know how to make words dance....
not everyone can love Michael oh great picture to accompany
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Michael, you are so sweet, thank you. I love it when you stop by, makes my day. A top rated poet grading my work, humbling... again thank you... jlsavell
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi jlsavell, It is an honor to be in a POM situation with such a wonderful word artist. Your piece is poetically stunning, vivid and with such heart. Good luck and all the best in your life too! xxoo deborah
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Hi jlsavell, It is an honor to be in a POM situation with such a wonderful word artist. Your piece is poetically stunning, vivid and with such heart. Good luck and all the best in your life too! xxoo deborah
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Deborah, actually it is an honor being in your company. Your work is phenomenal and I am truly humbled... again thank you.. jlsavell
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write Your poem is a sad poem and I'M sorry for your loss. The poem has lovely word and is full of emotion heart felt feelings. Thanks for sharing. Mary
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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A good write Your poem is a sad poem and I'M sorry for your loss. The poem has lovely word and is full of emotion heart felt feelings. Thanks for sharing. Mary
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Mary Ann MCPhedran, thank you ever so much for stoping by to read and review my work. Your thoughts and sympathy are appreciated. He was not a big part of my life, but my sons, as we parted when my son was a year old.. again thank you... jlavellelliejean
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. Death is devastating. Espically for a child. Loving memories of the loved one helps. THe wind chimes were an excellant idea. Great work.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I love the poem. Death is devastating. Espically for a child. Loving memories of the loved one helps. THe wind chimes were an excellant idea. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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elliejean, thank you ever so much for stopping by. Your review menas a great deal to me, again thank you, jlsavell
Comment from James crofoot
Excellent poem, very well written. You did a very good job in expressing your feelings in this soulful poem and the presentation tells of the peace I'm sure this man is feeling, even more so at him knowing of your love put in this.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Excellent poem, very well written. You did a very good job in expressing your feelings in this soulful poem and the presentation tells of the peace I'm sure this man is feeling, even more so at him knowing of your love put in this.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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James Crofoot, thank you ever so much for stopping in to read and review my work. I am humbled. I know I have been lacking in the revieiwng department, but hope to catch up soon. Again thank you ever ever so much.... jls
Comment from Fleedleflump
You've handled an emotionally fraught situatiin with elegance and beauty, Jimi. This is quietly spoken and heartfelt, a fitting tribute.
Mike
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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You've handled an emotionally fraught situatiin with elegance and beauty, Jimi. This is quietly spoken and heartfelt, a fitting tribute.
Mike
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Mike, how are you. I am always so very ecstatic when you stop in to read and review my work. thank you so very much. I know I have been lacking in the reviewing department lately, but hope to catch up soon..... again thank you... jimi
Comment from petervs
This was such a beautiful poem, the rhymes, the choice of words, the way it flowed! Thank you so much for sharing this, it really was a pleasant read, although it was actually a little heartbreaking! This poem will be appreciated by many! ;-)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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This was such a beautiful poem, the rhymes, the choice of words, the way it flowed! Thank you so much for sharing this, it really was a pleasant read, although it was actually a little heartbreaking! This poem will be appreciated by many! ;-)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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petervs, I do not beleive we have met before. Thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review. I am glad you appreciated its value.. again thank you... jls
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jlsavell
Loved reading your abab poem
Yes it brought emotional tears to my eyes the thought of wind chimes when you said so well-
This gift of bells envelop life's mortal token
Please place it where nature revels in the shade
Sit beneath its station, hear God's breath spoken
Meditate life's splendor, though loss has made it fade
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Hello jlsavell
Loved reading your abab poem
Yes it brought emotional tears to my eyes the thought of wind chimes when you said so well-
This gift of bells envelop life's mortal token
Please place it where nature revels in the shade
Sit beneath its station, hear God's breath spoken
Meditate life's splendor, though loss has made it fade
Gert
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Gert, thank you very much for your wonderful review. I appreciate you. jimi
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from sgalletti
Wow! So young. Reminds me of the deaths of my mother at age 44 and our son's wife at the age of 46. It doesn't seem fair. The wind chime was a great idea and I am sure will be treasured for many years. I am thrilled to have you back as I love your writing. And, I have been offsite pretty much myself, so I understand. Hope you are doing well. Hugs, Sue
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Wow! So young. Reminds me of the deaths of my mother at age 44 and our son's wife at the age of 46. It doesn't seem fair. The wind chime was a great idea and I am sure will be treasured for many years. I am thrilled to have you back as I love your writing. And, I have been offsite pretty much myself, so I understand. Hope you are doing well. Hugs, Sue
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Sue, thank you so very much for stiopping by to read and review my work. I remeber your son's wife death. A tragedy that cannot be reasoned. I am sorry to hear of your mother's early death. She was very young too. again thank you and it is good to hear from you too! jimi
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Not only is this a befitting and moving piece of poetry, your author's notes have inspired me with the tenderness that you shared with your son and all who will miss this man.
I've deliberately bookcased this as I may one day print your poem again and emulate your compassionate memory by using a heartfelt and very real way of expressing understanding and empathy.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Not only is this a befitting and moving piece of poetry, your author's notes have inspired me with the tenderness that you shared with your son and all who will miss this man.
I've deliberately bookcased this as I may one day print your poem again and emulate your compassionate memory by using a heartfelt and very real way of expressing understanding and empathy.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Spiritual Echo, once again I am humbled by your exceptional review. I appreciate your support of my work and value you. I am humbled that you would choose to use it, if ever in a time of need.. again thank you so very very much... jimi
