Multi-colored Memories
Rhyming Poem22 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
I don't know how I missed this one, Debbie. It's lovely.
We do grow with the 'tortuous times'(nice alliteration) and learn to care. I know how much a smile or hello means now to the disabled who seem to be invisible to the public. It's not all about material possessions. It is what we feel about ourselves inside. Actually, some folks after facing years of disability are better adjusted, know themselves better, than people who are not disabled and still have all of their materialistic hang-ups and misconceptions of what really matters.
This is a fine presentation of rhyming couples and has a very important theme.
It's bright and uplifting visual presentation adds to its meaning.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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I don't know how I missed this one, Debbie. It's lovely.
We do grow with the 'tortuous times'(nice alliteration) and learn to care. I know how much a smile or hello means now to the disabled who seem to be invisible to the public. It's not all about material possessions. It is what we feel about ourselves inside. Actually, some folks after facing years of disability are better adjusted, know themselves better, than people who are not disabled and still have all of their materialistic hang-ups and misconceptions of what really matters.
This is a fine presentation of rhyming couples and has a very important theme.
It's bright and uplifting visual presentation adds to its meaning.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie
Comment from missy98writer
Debbie,
Your poem is wonderfully penned with strong imagery painted by your meaningful words.
The art work you used is funky cool.
In your poem you've used excellent alliteration
You used great metaphors.
Your rhyme and meter are very good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Now there is acceptance
Life is not happenstance
Striving for gratitude
Seeking positive attitude
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
I'd recommend your creative poem to other reviewers.
Keep on rocking the poetic verse.
Love ya,
Melissa.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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Debbie,
Your poem is wonderfully penned with strong imagery painted by your meaningful words.
The art work you used is funky cool.
In your poem you've used excellent alliteration
You used great metaphors.
Your rhyme and meter are very good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Now there is acceptance
Life is not happenstance
Striving for gratitude
Seeking positive attitude
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
I'd recommend your creative poem to other reviewers.
Keep on rocking the poetic verse.
Love ya,
Melissa.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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Thank, Delissa-Debbie
Comment from JW
This is a well written poem and it does a good job of describing your past. In reading it I could not help but think about my own personal past.
In doing so - one song quickly came to mind:
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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This is a well written poem and it does a good job of describing your past. In reading it I could not help but think about my own personal past.
In doing so - one song quickly came to mind:
Comment Written 25-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Yes, we have all had our dark times. Thanks for sharing this song~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Debbie, this is wonderful! Love the colorful presentation too. I think we can all relate to what you say. When our lives change, so do our priorities. Comes with injury, sickness, or age. Too bad we have to suffer damage to find what is really important in life.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Debbie, this is wonderful! Love the colorful presentation too. I think we can all relate to what you say. When our lives change, so do our priorities. Comes with injury, sickness, or age. Too bad we have to suffer damage to find what is really important in life.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much, Phyllis. I was using some multi-colored yarn to crochet and this came to mind, LOL. Take care, my friend!!! Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie, its always good to read positive outcomes,without night what comparison do we have to daylight,comparison is the key to realization, a very colourful poem for a very colourful person. Kindest thoughts James xx
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Hi Debbie, its always good to read positive outcomes,without night what comparison do we have to daylight,comparison is the key to realization, a very colourful poem for a very colourful person. Kindest thoughts James xx
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, James. Take care my friend!!! Debbie
Comment from Joannforsberg
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me. Favorite line.
Beautifully written, and love how tied the photo and the different colors in the words together.
Blessings, JO
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me. Favorite line.
Beautifully written, and love how tied the photo and the different colors in the words together.
Blessings, JO
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from visionary1234
oh this one is lovely, Debbie - you've outlined our whole life's search in just a few, short, COLORFUL lines here - our search for our "real", AUTHENTIC self - and sometimes it eludes us for years. Glad you've found yours ...
:))))) Sharyn
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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oh this one is lovely, Debbie - you've outlined our whole life's search in just a few, short, COLORFUL lines here - our search for our "real", AUTHENTIC self - and sometimes it eludes us for years. Glad you've found yours ...
:))))) Sharyn
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thanks so very much, Sharyn :) Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Life is not happenstance
Striving for gratitude
seeking positive attitude
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
You said it all right here Debbie and love the multicolored memories.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Life is not happenstance
Striving for gratitude
seeking positive attitude
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
You said it all right here Debbie and love the multicolored memories.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Debbie, what a lovely poem, and what a lesson to be learned from it - isn't it funny how we take things for granted and how much we change when we are dealt trouble? We really do come out stronger when we survive it, I believe. Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Oh Debbie, what a lovely poem, and what a lesson to be learned from it - isn't it funny how we take things for granted and how much we change when we are dealt trouble? We really do come out stronger when we survive it, I believe. Excellent poem!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Yes we do and we learn to appreciate what we do have. Thank you!!! Debbie
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My pleasure, Debbie. :)
Comment from Tina McKala
I like how the how the whole poem has a ever smooth flow except the last line, which stands apart and farces the reader to think of what he just read. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I like how the how the whole poem has a ever smooth flow except the last line, which stands apart and farces the reader to think of what he just read. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
