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Abuse

2 total reviews 
Comment from L. Sherman
Excellent
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Such a chill and such powerful emotion in such few words. A dark subject and a tragic reality. You expound on a very terrifying reality in a blunt way and that makes this just so much more potent.

Well done.

L. Sherman

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2012

Comment from Opal H.
Good
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A sad,simple haiku describing the plight of someone going through domestic violence. With regards to the form of potry, however, all the letters at the beginning of each line should be lower case.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2012