friend and foe
friends becomes by good behavear.2 total reviews
Comment from walterhuber
I think that this is interesting, but needed a little work. It seems to me the author got 3 words that rhymed: spice, nice and mice, and tried to make a 5/7/5 poem, matching the rhyme with required syllables. It is ok, but needs work.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
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I think that this is interesting, but needed a little work. It seems to me the author got 3 words that rhymed: spice, nice and mice, and tried to make a 5/7/5 poem, matching the rhyme with required syllables. It is ok, but needs work.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
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THANK YOU I WILL REMEMBER THIS NEXT TIME
Comment from ronnie k
There is a inlayed message for sure, oh, I SEE THE EATING AWAY OF PARTS OF YOU, FRIENDS AND FOES BOTH are dishonest and unwarranted. Hope I am in the ballfield and I MUST CHANGE MY 4 TO 5 TO BE FAIR. GOOD WORK
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
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There is a inlayed message for sure, oh, I SEE THE EATING AWAY OF PARTS OF YOU, FRIENDS AND FOES BOTH are dishonest and unwarranted. Hope I am in the ballfield and I MUST CHANGE MY 4 TO 5 TO BE FAIR. GOOD WORK
Comment Written 07-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS .
