Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I think you are right Kristina. I think love has hurt everyone at one time or anther. If not just by the passing of someone you loved. Very well written. And the perfect picture. Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2013

Thanks for your encoragement. It means a lot to me.

Warmest regards,
Kristina

Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Is it love that's cruel, or is it our human imperfections which cause the cruelty? Nice poem, which raises interesting points. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013

Thanks for your great review.Kristina

Comment from eowyn0003

Excellent

Your sentiments reflect the truth about love, but I think if you check your syllable count it is slightly off. I gave you a five star for content.

Lura

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013

Thanks for your great review. Kristina

Comment from PoeticXscape

Excellent

This was very good. I enjoyed the twist at the end about how love is cruel to some people. This is so true as I know. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013

Thanks for your encouragement. It means a lot to me. Kristina

Comment from hollyinvesuvianite

Excellent

This is a really nice piece of work! It has the correct word count and nice use of punctuation. 'A wondrous thing on earth' is absolutely great way of wording the divine aspect of love. And the ending hits home for many. Great piece of creative thought went into this, and I wish you much luck in the contest! Holly

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2013

Thanks for reviewing and for your thoughtful comment!:)

reply by hollyinvesuvianite on 16-Jan-2013

You are very welcome! My pleasure! :) Holly

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

The second line has only 6 syllables--wondrous is two--I looked it up to be sure. I don't think I would start 2 lines with so. I do wish you luck in the contest~Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013

Thanks a lot for your thoughtful comment. I will see to it.

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Unwraps itself in many ways
Has many faces
Until loyal and forever true comes t call
happy ever after is still possible

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013

Thanks a lot for reviewing and for your thoughtful comment!!

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Your poem is great love can be great and pure for some and then for others its a diaster..... So few words but with such a powerful meaning. Nicely done...

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013

Thanks for reviewing and for your encouragement!

Comment from Ekim777

Good

If love is a potent force, we can easily be burned by it. And how do we define human love. I say, let us take the supreme being for granted. It is hard enough relating to human love. You call it divine and sweet, I call it fragile and transitory like life itself. Be well. -Ekim777

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013

Thanks for reviewing. A thoughtful comment indeed.

Comment from Tina McKala

Excellent

Hello! nice poem, profound and true, love is everything, sweet and cruel as nothing else, you captured that quite well. Your poem has a message, which is only good point. good luck in the contest and welcome ;)

ps: your nickname sounds a lot slavic..is it? :) (sorry for off topic)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013

Thanks a lot for your encouragement. I truly appreciate it. Yes, its slavic but I am chinese actually. I love to watch Cezchoslovakian fairy tales as a child and I love them still. So, are you Scottish or Irish?? ^^

reply by Tina McKala on 14-Jan-2013

You`re welcome!

born in former Czechoslovakia, that`s why I asked ;)