Comment from hollyinvesuvianite

Excellent

Hello, my friend.
This is such a beautiful 5-7-5 with some wonderful vocabulary choices- 'clusters,' 'shine brilliantly,' and 'awe'- 'gaze.' Great image to add to your wonderful text! great work and good luck in the contest! Holly

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks for your great review. Cheers, Kristina

reply by hollyinvesuvianite on 11-Feb-2013

You are very welcome!

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, kristina, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the stars that catch our eye. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Thanks a lot for your great review. Cheers, Kristina

reply by sweetwoodjax on 08-Feb-2013

you inspired me to write one about stars--look back in about 5 minutes.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 poem captured a good feeling. The stars are like a night time piece of artwork that many enjoy watching. Good use of words and flow of lines.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Thanks for your great review. Cheers, Kristina