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Comment from fairy77
ha ha! Too funny friend. The pic said it all. Your really imaginative and the conversations involving fruit:) I really enjoyed it. I loved the sexy poses. Fucking hilarious! beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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ha ha! Too funny friend. The pic said it all. Your really imaginative and the conversations involving fruit:) I really enjoyed it. I loved the sexy poses. Fucking hilarious! beth fairy77.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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When reading scripts one has to have an active imaginative. If you were the director you could plans the poses. LOL
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, spitfire, you did a great job insinuating my comment in there and the woman who gave it all back and then some to the obscene phone caller...
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, spitfire, you did a great job insinuating my comment in there and the woman who gave it all back and then some to the obscene phone caller...
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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And then you, sweets, for the marvelous line.
Comment from Tomoso
Spitfire,
Very funny!
I don't usually read scripts,except yours when I get a chance because you're so good with them. You obviously had a great bit of craic writing this and it shows. "takes a vicious bite of the banana" loved that LOL
Tom
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Spitfire,
Very funny!
I don't usually read scripts,except yours when I get a chance because you're so good with them. You obviously had a great bit of craic writing this and it shows. "takes a vicious bite of the banana" loved that LOL
Tom
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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W0w! I'm so flattered. Yes, I have had some professional help along the way with this kind of writing. Thanks so much for the exceptional rating. You're a peach.
Comment from BethShelby
This is so funny. You have a great sense of humor and you are excellent at writing scripts. I like the way you describe the setting.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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This is so funny. You have a great sense of humor and you are excellent at writing scripts. I like the way you describe the setting.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thanks, Beth, for your wonderful comments and the five stars.
Comment from Mr. Dan
Ha! Great skit there. It gets a bit gross in the middle (a good thing) . I also really like the way that it ended...perfect note
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Ha! Great skit there. It gets a bit gross in the middle (a good thing) . I also really like the way that it ended...perfect note
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thanks, Mr. Dan. I did get a bit gross and thought about toning it down. Depends upon reactions.
Comment from God's Writer
Thank you for the humorous skit. They both are pictured as old in my mind. I found the laugh to be quite nice as I lay here in bed trying to stay warm. It is 18 now and supposed to get up to 48. Heat wave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the early morning comedy.
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Thank you for the humorous skit. They both are pictured as old in my mind. I found the laugh to be quite nice as I lay here in bed trying to stay warm. It is 18 now and supposed to get up to 48. Heat wave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the early morning comedy.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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It's cold here too. 30's at night and sixties in day. So I stay indoors. Funny that you pictured them as old. So did another reviewer.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Very clever and funny. I enjoyed it even though I usually don't read scripts. Take some getting used to, I think. You do them well!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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LOL! Very clever and funny. I enjoyed it even though I usually don't read scripts. Take some getting used to, I think. You do them well!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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THanks, Phyllis. It's my favorite kind of writing, to be honest.
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I think I don't like to read them mostly because I'm not familiar with the form for writing them. If I learned, I could turn my books into screenplays, since they are mostly dialogue. But I am old and lazy. No new tricks for me! :)
Comment from judiverse
That old gal sure knew how to deal with an obscene caller. She had him going to the point that he hangs up and goes into a fetal position. Great comments from her about his needing artificial respiration and asking for a description of the jock strap were great. Asking for money to pay shipping and handling is funny too. She seems to be enjoying herself throughout. Obscene phone calls make her day. judi
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That old gal sure knew how to deal with an obscene caller. She had him going to the point that he hangs up and goes into a fetal position. Great comments from her about his needing artificial respiration and asking for a description of the jock strap were great. Asking for money to pay shipping and handling is funny too. She seems to be enjoying herself throughout. Obscene phone calls make her day. judi
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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I always love your reviews. You see the small stuff--how she reduced him to infancy. I left this open in case I wanted to do another one with her and another caller.
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That's one way of handling an obscene caller, and amusing it was. judi
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh what the hell, what else have I got to say except it's brilliantly funny, you gave us fabulous direction and you set the scene wonderfully in the beginning? It doesn't get any better than this!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh what the hell, what else have I got to say except it's brilliantly funny, you gave us fabulous direction and you set the scene wonderfully in the beginning? It doesn't get any better than this!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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I hear you laughing all the way to Florida. Thanks so much for the meaningful six. Appreciate the comments on setting.
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Hahahahaha! Yes, I bet you do! You are welcome - well earned.
Comment from Fluffyhead
I am sitting here when I should but sleeping laughing my ass off its all your fault cuz you are an awesome writer. Love sarcastic old ladies. Have a nice day. peace
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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I am sitting here when I should but sleeping laughing my ass off its all your fault cuz you are an awesome writer. Love sarcastic old ladies. Have a nice day. peace
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Yea! Six stars and a compliment for dessert. Thanks, Fluffy
