draped in darkness
a girl waiting for her love..3 total reviews
Comment from PandorasBox11
Very nicely written poem! So much imagery used and it definitely raises certain emotions. The only thing I noticed that was off is the syllable counts required for the haiku style of poetry. But other than that I'd say this poem is superb!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Very nicely written poem! So much imagery used and it definitely raises certain emotions. The only thing I noticed that was off is the syllable counts required for the haiku style of poetry. But other than that I'd say this poem is superb!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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yes it is not a haiku poem, will take care of that from the next time! thanks!
Comment from TOMORAL
Excellent romantic and passionate love poem You certainly know how to wing your words and wrap them around a perfect picture of love. Very good.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Excellent romantic and passionate love poem You certainly know how to wing your words and wrap them around a perfect picture of love. Very good.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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thnk you!! even your one line review left me drooling over your writing skills!!
Comment from Treischel
A very intriguing romantic love poem full of poetic imagery and variable rhyme that is sensuous and full of passion and desire. I'm not sure how this could possibly be a 5-7-5 poem, and I didn't rate you on that format. But it is curious.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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A very intriguing romantic love poem full of poetic imagery and variable rhyme that is sensuous and full of passion and desire. I'm not sure how this could possibly be a 5-7-5 poem, and I didn't rate you on that format. But it is curious.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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yes it isnt a 5-7-5 poem. my mistake!
