Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

You certainly put your new camera to the test life. Well written with smooth flow and clear message, A fun verse. Your picture adds so much to help the visual for the reader. Smiles, Robin :)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

Thank you Robin. It was fun to get out and shot some photos again.

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

I thought it was a polar bear at my first glance. Until I read the words and realized it was ice in a form.

Still behind on reviewing so adding generic words also.

Hello, my computer is acting up and running slowly. So my reviews will be generic today. I normally do a slow read and review. Today, I am using my speed reading powers to review pages of written words here at Fanstory. I never consider the five stars I give as fluffy. For truly I am impressed with each writer I review. So, my five star is not a fluff piece given to you. But, I did speed read today and not given specific thoughts. Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

Ok thanks Jo

Comment from SaraHLMarion

Good

Good Basic poem almost befitting to Seattle. I liked the alliteration and the style of your stanza's are nicely formatted. best.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

Thank you Sara.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

neat picture and poem. How fun to write a poem from a photograph. It does look like a creature. Nice imagery and good flow to this poem.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

Thank you Tab