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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Another new form for me. Your excellent verse certainly
brought a smile to my face. The picture of you singing, ops, I mean the ape singing is hilarious. Smiles. Robin :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Another new form for me. Your excellent verse certainly
brought a smile to my face. The picture of you singing, ops, I mean the ape singing is hilarious. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thanks Robin. Smiles all around.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treishel,
You are really good with these difficult poem forms. Thank you for sharing.
Tried to sing with this monkey
Rearranged his call
It still came out rather funky.....but I tried
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Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Aloha Treishel,
You are really good with these difficult poem forms. Thank you for sharing.
Tried to sing with this monkey
Rearranged his call
It still came out rather funky.....but I tried
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Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thanks Ginger. Loved that cute Monkey.
Comment from Sararb
Very humorous! I loved this one it made me smile. Very good minute poem. You used descriptive words birds, and the Monkeys cry. and a croak and a howl all of the sounds. very well written. Sararb
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Very humorous! I loved this one it made me smile. Very good minute poem. You used descriptive words birds, and the Monkeys cry. and a croak and a howl all of the sounds. very well written. Sararb
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you Sararb. For the comments and stars.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
How in the world does one ever keep all these rules for so many different kinds of poems straight in their mind. It just seems overwhelming to me. You guys are more than smart. I'm sure you don't sound like no monkey. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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How in the world does one ever keep all these rules for so many different kinds of poems straight in their mind. It just seems overwhelming to me. You guys are more than smart. I'm sure you don't sound like no monkey. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you Evelyn. I appreciate the compliment very much. I not too hard. The rules are all right here on the site. Under the Home tab, then Poetry Dance. So happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from tedanytime
Fine construction of this howler! Nothing like making a joke on yourself.
There are great words, rhythm and rhyme in this verse. Any cry or croak or melodious tone can be used to praise the One that made the voice.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Fine construction of this howler! Nothing like making a joke on yourself.
There are great words, rhythm and rhyme in this verse. Any cry or croak or melodious tone can be used to praise the One that made the voice.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you Tedanytime. Hope you got a smile!
Comment from RodG
Minute poem or sonnet, this one is playful and very amusing. I like how the Speaker mocks himself by contrasting his voice with that of birds and choirs. Technically, the poem is flawless and I enjoy the rhymes used. RodG
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Minute poem or sonnet, this one is playful and very amusing. I like how the Speaker mocks himself by contrasting his voice with that of birds and choirs. Technically, the poem is flawless and I enjoy the rhymes used. RodG
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you RodG, if you got a smile out of it, I succeeded.
