Silver Lining
Naani8 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
An awesome depiction of what the heavens illuminate right after the storm has blown over and only the radiant sunshine brings forth a fresh, new beginning.
Charlene
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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An awesome depiction of what the heavens illuminate right after the storm has blown over and only the radiant sunshine brings forth a fresh, new beginning.
Charlene
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Hi Charlene,
and thank you for your kind review - Cally :)))
Comment from BeasPeas
Good words to remember when we are facing a challenge in life. This too shall pass. We'll get through it and forget about it until we face another storm cloud. Like 'is merely a huddle.' Well done. CONGRATULATIONS on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Good words to remember when we are facing a challenge in life. This too shall pass. We'll get through it and forget about it until we face another storm cloud. Like 'is merely a huddle.' Well done. CONGRATULATIONS on winning the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Beas Peas, for your insightful review and kind comments. It was quite a shock this morning, because when I went to bed last night, I had been in joint second place for hours! LOL Thanks again - Cally :)
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It's always a shock and a pleasure to win one now and then. Gives us confidence that our fellow writers think highly of our efforts.
Comment from DALLAS01
The art work grabbed my attention immediately. The philosophy that follows is soothing to the soul,and whispers the reassurance we all need to hear at one time or another.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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The art work grabbed my attention immediately. The philosophy that follows is soothing to the soul,and whispers the reassurance we all need to hear at one time or another.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review! This really lifted my day. Thanks - Cally :)))))
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You're welcome. Had my vote
Comment from angelmagnet
I like your poetry, and I certainly like your words of wisdom.Everything that looks fearful is usually something else. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!, Cindy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I like your poetry, and I certainly like your words of wisdom.Everything that looks fearful is usually something else. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!, Cindy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Hi Cindy,
and thank you so much for your thoughtful review - Cally :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a wonderful work - such grace,wisdom and a peace it gave me as I read. Great job and good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
"even the largest storm cloud
is merely a huddle
of tiny raindrops
waiting for the sun" // loved your word choices!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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This is a wonderful work - such grace,wisdom and a peace it gave me as I read. Great job and good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
"even the largest storm cloud
is merely a huddle
of tiny raindrops
waiting for the sun" // loved your word choices!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Hi Maureen,
and thank you so much for your encouraging words, and thoughtful review. Hope you having a bright, sunny weekend - Cally :)
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem of 23 syllables in 4 lines is in excellent naani form
excellent consonance of L sounds in your first lines
I just love the image of raindrops huddling together to form a cloud
and I love the upbeat message that they are waiting for the sun to arrive :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Your poem of 23 syllables in 4 lines is in excellent naani form
excellent consonance of L sounds in your first lines
I just love the image of raindrops huddling together to form a cloud
and I love the upbeat message that they are waiting for the sun to arrive :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Brooke. Finally, I am "getting it" with some of the form poems. LOL
Hope you are having a bright and sunny weekend - Cally :)
Comment from rama devi
Love it-and this is pone of of the few entries that has a naani flavor (universally applicable and aphoristic in style). Love the word choice of huddle. Well voiced and effective. Nice presentation.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Love it-and this is pone of of the few entries that has a naani flavor (universally applicable and aphoristic in style). Love the word choice of huddle. Well voiced and effective. Nice presentation.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Rama.
I was just starting to think I might have to give up trying to think of something which "expresses one and all" when this idea popped into my head... a good lesson in persistence! LOL
Thanks again - Cally :)
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Ah yes, yours was one of the very few that addressed one and all...so i am very pleased it won as opposed to the ones that were not true naani. I had stopped entering and voting in contests these last few months, and when the contest voting first opened, i was not happy with the voter's choices...until it shifted! :)
Comment from angelface2
A lovely Naani. I love the picture it is perfect for this poem. along with the sunshine, we must get a little rain sometime. HUH? Nicely done. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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A lovely Naani. I love the picture it is perfect for this poem. along with the sunshine, we must get a little rain sometime. HUH? Nicely done. Miss Sally
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your kind thoughts, Miss Sally. Have a great weekend - Cally :)
