Comment from robina1978

Excellent

The picture is excellent and complements your poem so well.
I liked this Sonnet that was so well written and not about romance. Good rhyme and meter.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

Thank you robina.

reply by robina1978 on 06-Apr-2013

most welcome, Ine

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

I am horrified at the picture now in my mind of little Joe with a dart and apple. Your mother must have been an absolute saint. Great verse, very clear message with great visual expressions. Enjoyable read. Robin :)

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013

Thanks Robin. Yes, my mom was handy with a wooden spoon or paddle.

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

ahah, I like you doing funny and even an ignoramous such as moi has heard of William Tell :) Thanks for the entertainment Tom - good job, Indie

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013

Thanks Indie. Never said I was a smart Kid. :0/ my mom was handy with a wooden spoon or paddle.

reply by Indie Skreet on 05-Apr-2013

lol, she sounds perfect a joy!

reply by Indie Skreet on 05-Apr-2013

ps I am sure you were a smart kid - if not you were surely smarting

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013

Good one. A word wizard like you should be a poet!
Oh!........You are!