Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 " Leslie Ann goes to college"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from Curly Girly
Wow, this is a sexy costume in your image choice. She is a naughty girl and I'm waiting to see where all this is going to lead.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Wow, this is a sexy costume in your image choice. She is a naughty girl and I'm waiting to see where all this is going to lead.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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I'm happy you're enjoying it!
Comment from alexisleech
In just a few verses, you have managed to give us so much information about both Leslie Anne and Jonathan, which in turn allows us to form a judgement regarding their characters. She's a rich bitch spoilt brat, he's a weary out of work husband with a wife and two children to support. The image makes her look very sexual, so this should be interesting!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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In just a few verses, you have managed to give us so much information about both Leslie Anne and Jonathan, which in turn allows us to form a judgement regarding their characters. She's a rich bitch spoilt brat, he's a weary out of work husband with a wife and two children to support. The image makes her look very sexual, so this should be interesting!
Alexis x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Alexis! Your comments warm my heart. I was so unsure about posting this story in this fashion, but so far, only one person has cited that poem stories don't always hold the readers' attention, or readers get tired of reading in rhyme. I suppose I'll just have to wait and see. Thanks again! Dossie
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Mmmm, trying to cause trouble already by setting up to destroy a beautiful family man--not good. Leslie Ann should watch her step very careful before the wrong people come after her. Enjoyed the story told in a poem style my friend.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Mmmm, trying to cause trouble already by setting up to destroy a beautiful family man--not good. Leslie Ann should watch her step very careful before the wrong people come after her. Enjoyed the story told in a poem style my friend.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Paradox Tremors! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Dossie,
Your poem is interesting, but it tells a sad story. Leslie Ann apparently had everything she wanted except the right man. She was rather forward when she stuck her card in Jonathan's book. She had desires for a married man. Little did she know, or I doubt if she cared, he was losing his job and in a state of great despair. The poem/story is written extremely well.
Your cliff hanger ending left me wondering is Jonathan fell for the bait when her picture fell out of his book.
Curtis
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Dossie,
Your poem is interesting, but it tells a sad story. Leslie Ann apparently had everything she wanted except the right man. She was rather forward when she stuck her card in Jonathan's book. She had desires for a married man. Little did she know, or I doubt if she cared, he was losing his job and in a state of great despair. The poem/story is written extremely well.
Your cliff hanger ending left me wondering is Jonathan fell for the bait when her picture fell out of his book.
Curtis
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Curtis. I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from angelmagnet
I'm overly curious about what attraction this man holds for Leslie Ann. Your story within a poem is good reading and a little Intoxicating. Looking forward to more
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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I'm overly curious about what attraction this man holds for Leslie Ann. Your story within a poem is good reading and a little Intoxicating. Looking forward to more
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, angelmagnet. I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'm on the oldish side. I don't think he took her card the way she intended. The girl in the picture is lovely but it makes one wonder about their wisdom of dressing as such, good way to get hurt. Good piece. God loves you and so do i. Janie's with her mother's in the hospital again.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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I'm on the oldish side. I don't think he took her card the way she intended. The girl in the picture is lovely but it makes one wonder about their wisdom of dressing as such, good way to get hurt. Good piece. God loves you and so do i. Janie's with her mother's in the hospital again.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Evelyn! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from Gungalo
This is a story and a half Titan. Will he call her and at what cost will she come? So sad when someone is at an all time low and they don't know where to turn next.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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This is a story and a half Titan. Will he call her and at what cost will she come? So sad when someone is at an all time low and they don't know where to turn next.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Gungalo! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Hi Dossie, I think it should be woeful goodbye.
So she gave him a business card? For what reason. She's up to no good you can bet. This story rhymes? That is different. Well lets see what you have for us. Interesting, Nancy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Hi Dossie, I think it should be woeful goodbye.
So she gave him a business card? For what reason. She's up to no good you can bet. This story rhymes? That is different. Well lets see what you have for us. Interesting, Nancy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Nancy! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend you tell this story so well the characters come to life so well you paint the images I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
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Yes my friend you tell this story so well the characters come to life so well you paint the images I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Jill! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!
Comment from dmt1967
This is a sad chapter the poor man I do feel for him she is still a bad egg in my opinion though very well told this story can't wait for the next chapter
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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This is a sad chapter the poor man I do feel for him she is still a bad egg in my opinion though very well told this story can't wait for the next chapter
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thanks, dmt1967! I appreciate your reading, commenting and rating this one. Peace and blessings!!