The Sky's The Limit
There is no one telling you you can't.5 total reviews
Comment from Joyce Crowe
Very well done. a big message in such few words. Your syllable count is perfect. Good insirational message that reminds the reader not to give up on their dreams.
Very well done. a big message in such few words. Your syllable count is perfect. Good insirational message that reminds the reader not to give up on their dreams.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
Comment from Insane Membrane
some true and encouraging words said in a very few lines well done its difficult to comment much more on these shorties but good look in the comp and have a great day
some true and encouraging words said in a very few lines well done its difficult to comment much more on these shorties but good look in the comp and have a great day
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
i am a bit confused with this 'They didn't say that you can't'
it knocks it off and i am not actually sure what it means in relation to the skys the limit
good luck
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
hiya,
i am a bit confused with this 'They didn't say that you can't'
it knocks it off and i am not actually sure what it means in relation to the skys the limit
good luck
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Well thank you for your rating and comment.
Comment from Florrie
I give this 5-7-5 a good rating because I do believe that everyone should try harder to reach their goal in life, or in their careers, or their pursuit of happiness. florrie
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
I give this 5-7-5 a good rating because I do believe that everyone should try harder to reach their goal in life, or in their careers, or their pursuit of happiness. florrie
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the comment and the rating.
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You are welcome. Have a good day. florrie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, techster, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about trying harder to achieve something and never giving up. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
this is very well written, techster, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about trying harder to achieve something and never giving up. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this comment and rating.