Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Leslie Ann's misstep"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from EmberSnowcat
I really like the concept. It is not to exotic, yet just exotic and sultry enough. No spag that I could find. I love that even though she was turned down, she still felt sure of herself to run to the other man. Interested in reading the rest. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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I really like the concept. It is not to exotic, yet just exotic and sultry enough. No spag that I could find. I love that even though she was turned down, she still felt sure of herself to run to the other man. Interested in reading the rest. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much, EmberSnowcat, for this most encouraging review and the equally generous rating!
Comment from Curly Girly
Oh, dear. Poor Thomas. I hope he is not left feeling that he has been used. Men can get angry about being treated like that. He could become dangerous.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Oh, dear. Poor Thomas. I hope he is not left feeling that he has been used. Men can get angry about being treated like that. He could become dangerous.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks for for reading and commenting on chapter 9. Love the rating!
Comment from sunnilicious
That steaminess came so left field. A little dating first not necessary for a girl like Leslie. That's so not even the least bit classy. But I'm happy Leslie isn't breaking Jonathan's relationship. I'm not sure what to make of Thomas. What will happen next?
Exciting stuff. Enjoyable read. Great work :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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That steaminess came so left field. A little dating first not necessary for a girl like Leslie. That's so not even the least bit classy. But I'm happy Leslie isn't breaking Jonathan's relationship. I'm not sure what to make of Thomas. What will happen next?
Exciting stuff. Enjoyable read. Great work :)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks, sunni! I'm happy you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Spitfire
LOL. Love the author's notes-- Thomas takes her in. A hot love scene. Of course, he's in denial that he's a victim of rebound. Favorite line:
That made him rapidly rise like yeast in a braided bun. :-)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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LOL. Love the author's notes-- Thomas takes her in. A hot love scene. Of course, he's in denial that he's a victim of rebound. Favorite line:
That made him rapidly rise like yeast in a braided bun. :-)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Spitfire, there are certain writers and poets on fanstory, such as yourself, who read my work and I truly treasure their comments, because I know they are going to be real whether or not I like their comments. Thanks so much for that and thanks for this great review!
Comment from Paradox Tremors
After finish this, I'm beginning to wonder which is truly Leslie's misstep ... Probably going to Thomas and getting liquored up and making out.Well written.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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After finish this, I'm beginning to wonder which is truly Leslie's misstep ... Probably going to Thomas and getting liquored up and making out.Well written.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much, Paradox Tremors!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
There's a twist I hadn't expected. Leslie Ann has a weakness. She runs crying to Thomas when she is rejected. She's not made of stone after all. Very good job and the sex scene was tastefully done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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There's a twist I hadn't expected. Leslie Ann has a weakness. She runs crying to Thomas when she is rejected. She's not made of stone after all. Very good job and the sex scene was tastefully done.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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I appreciate this excellent review, Phyllis! I started writing this story poem to see where I could take it, so your positive review is much appreciated.
Comment from steevie
OMG!!! That dirty little skank!! She went for it and so did Thomas. It just goes to show that patience is a virtue, at least in Thomas's case it was.
But when you think about it, Leslie could hardly feel guilty, as she is what amounts to being, a cold hearted bitch!
This is an awesome turn of events, Dossie! Wow!! I need a stiff drink to process the new developments.
A fantastic write, Dossie.
Can't wait for more.
Big
smiles
and
big
hugs
as
well
steve
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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OMG!!! That dirty little skank!! She went for it and so did Thomas. It just goes to show that patience is a virtue, at least in Thomas's case it was.
But when you think about it, Leslie could hardly feel guilty, as she is what amounts to being, a cold hearted bitch!
This is an awesome turn of events, Dossie! Wow!! I need a stiff drink to process the new developments.
A fantastic write, Dossie.
Can't wait for more.
Big
smiles
and
big
hugs
as
well
steve
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Steevie, I love your review and enthusiasm!
You're the best, Dossie!
steve
hugs
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Dossie,
This is a good continuation to the story as Leslie Ann, rejected by Jonathan, rebounds to Thomas. This took care of her short-term needs, but I don't think she is through pursuing Jonathan. My friend, I enjoyed the story.
Curtis
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Dossie,
This is a good continuation to the story as Leslie Ann, rejected by Jonathan, rebounds to Thomas. This took care of her short-term needs, but I don't think she is through pursuing Jonathan. My friend, I enjoyed the story.
Curtis
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Curtis!
Comment from Gungalo
They used their hands and lips to touch all the right spots.
Thomas refused to accept, she may be there on the rebound.
He sighed with pleasure and sank into her velvety sheath,
And rode her high and hard and relished in her love sounds.
Boy did he ever and in a hurry too. It's too bad it won't last for him. Sigh.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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They used their hands and lips to touch all the right spots.
Thomas refused to accept, she may be there on the rebound.
He sighed with pleasure and sank into her velvety sheath,
And rode her high and hard and relished in her love sounds.
Boy did he ever and in a hurry too. It's too bad it won't last for him. Sigh.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Gungalo!
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Smile girl.
Comment from God's Writer
A great story told in the fashion of a poem. Beautiful and expressive word images flowed softly off the page as my eyes enjoyed the experience of reading well written sensuality.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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A great story told in the fashion of a poem. Beautiful and expressive word images flowed softly off the page as my eyes enjoyed the experience of reading well written sensuality.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thanks for this encouraging review!