Comment from Twilightspire

Exceptional

I love this story! You make it so poetic but tell it like a story. This chapter shows the consequences of a prank gone bad. Great story with an amazing character. Very well written.
-T.J.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 01-May-2013

I thank you once more for this stellar review and awesome rating!

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is an electrifying chapter. Watch out with those little mousey ladies! For sure they have a mind for revenge. Your lines kept me on a spin.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 01-May-2013

You are so kind! I sort of ascribe to the notion that good wins over bad every time - LOL. Thanks so much for the generous rating and awesome comments!

Comment from EmberSnowcat

Excellent

I get so happy when I see that you posted a new Leslie Ann story! I believe I am a bit addicted to this story LOL. I love how twisted her mind became after being locked up in there all night. And yet upon seeing her arch enemy Mary Ann, she become even more terrified! I cannot wait to find out how she spent more time than she was suppose to in there! This is getting really intense. No spag that I could find either. Great job!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 01-May-2013

Thanks for stopping by to read my Leslie Ann saga _ lol. I will post again in the next couple days, I hope you'll stop by. Be blessed and thanks again!

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

This shows you that it is better not to plan things. Poor Leslie Ann. Her plan to wreak havoc on someone backfired and instead she is scared stiff.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter. Yes, the crafty little vixen got caught in a trap of her own making.

reply by Gungalo on 29-Apr-2013

I'd say she did. LOL

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good assonance in much beloved
good use of abcb rhyming
six year rife with her parents - rift?
good alliteration in heavy heart/hospital
a compelling portrait of Lesley Ann in her catatonic state
Brooke

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it!

Comment from angelmagnet

Excellent

Could this be the end of Leslie Ann's tale locked in a world with no pleasure, no pain, no escape? If so, I guess she got what she deserved. If not, what could be up her sleeve, now that her sleeves are straitjacketed?

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! It's funny because she was only supposed to be locked in the lab for an hour or two.

Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

This is such a good read! It Is packed with excitement and even coming to the story rather late, I am caught up in the drama and find the characters to be most interesting. It's all very entertaining. Well done!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! I am delighted you are enjoying it, and I appreciate your encouraging comments!! Dossie

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Oh so that wasn't the intent after all. MA just meant to give a good scare. Interesting. Did I miss some foreshadowing here? It must have to do with the white powder (cocaine?) Seems that MA is the decent sort and Leslie might have planned a worse fate for her. Interesting turn of events.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Mary Ann is not wicked, but she was not about to stand by and allow a crafty little vixen steal her husband. The plan was to scare Leslie Ann as a warning, but it went awry because of Thomas. The white power? Stay tuned.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

You tell a chilling, suspense filled story with rhythm and rhymes that gives it an airy, easy feeling, yet the ending is sad. Wonderfully written. Les

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! Thanks so much, Les for your encouraging and complimentary comments, I appreciate them!! Dossie

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Outstanding installment. I love the ease with which you write the poetry, rhyming humility with civility and so on. You are really good at this. So Thomas was in on it with Mary Ann after all. Well, serves Leslie right, I say. :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks again, Phyllis for your stellar review and the six-star rating. I appreciate both!! I am BEYOND delighted that you like this story! Dossie