Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

I loved reading this. I like the way you described your train of thoughts. So normal..LOL Good luck in the contest with a great entry.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015

Thank you so much for your kind review :)

Comment from mprsflame

Excellent

Talk about randomness in writing, you have got the market cornered. That was wonderfully humourous and magically up-lifting. I like marshmallows but after reading your little tale, I'll be looking at them with a different opinion, I think. Those little subtle thoughts popping in between the lines was a beautiful touch of the mental processes at work, too. Loved it.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015

Thank you so much for your kind review :)

Comment from JeanneHP

Excellent

That is a unique story. I absolutely enjoyed it. Isn't that what we all do? Brain jumps from one thing to another with almost no control. Very nice!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thank you!
...and YES! I reckon so! LOL
:)))

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

I like your marshmallow treat. The taste may not be exceptional, but they aren't bad roasted outside over a fire.

Life is like a marshmallow. The more people sit on you, the flatter you get.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Ha! Ha! ...yea!
Thank you :)